Posted by rell20 Wow! This was very good. I can't wait to see what happens on the next episode. I hope sean doesn't get hurt cause i really like him, and i like patrick. But, I feel sorry for danny, but i don't think that he is behind all of this. Good work! Now we will have another brilliant series of yours to read since you are ending detention at episode 12.
Posted by Lisa It's good,I get a totally different feeling from this and detention. It really shows that you are not locked into 1 writing style. I'm anxious to find out what happens next
Posted by David He's Ending Detention at 12?! AHHHH! Once again you write the best stories. Your the best author on this site. Keep up the great work.
Posted by mark ecellent stuff yet again. cant wait for part 3
Posted by Kat Could this also go up to 12??? Great follow on from the first one, I just love the way you carry us along and keep us hanging. My money's on Danny and I can't wait to see what happens next. YOU'RE THE BEST.
Posted by Michael Booker Thanx, as for Detention, I plan to extend it a little bit longer, perhaps to 15
Posted by prettyface yow everyone out there,don't you love the way this guy is pulling us, i just love his work keep it up messioh.
Posted by Cod It worthed waiting Michael,couse you gave us another great story!Now I’m almost certain that you had a 10+++ in psychology.You are indeed proven to be a fascinating wrighter with inexhaustible and original ideas and a captivating pattern to manipulate them.
There are three elements that intrweave in this story:secrets,obsession and counterfeit.Sean is concealingly fascinated,to the point of obsession,with his stud straight jock friend from early childhood Patrick,although he tries hard not show it.Yet as the days go by it gets even harder,almost impossible for him.“Took you love enough” says to him.However he finds difficult to distinguish his true emotions;actually to admit his love.He even considers that the fact Patrick has a girlfriend,forbids him to have any feelings towards him.He Can’t Lie Forever,though!
Patrick stays in a dead and fake relationship with his girlfriend,just “for appearance”!He doesn’t like her at all,they haven’t even once had sex,in their long-time affair!Poor guy,don’t want to be in his shoes!Don’t tell us he’s a vergin!That would be way too hot!But It’s all for appearance after all;he seems to be resignedly enclosed in the model of the most popural guy in school ,in a what seems to be an obsessive way,since he refuse to do anything to go over it!He cares about Sean,that’s the most certain thing;I believe he even suspects that Sean has a crush on him!Will he accept it?Will he even make the first move?
As for Danny,he’s for sure obsessed with Sean;Sean’s disinterest and rejection infuriated him.He seemed determined to obstruct any possibility of attachment between those two.So that makes him the first class suspect for all those intimidating stuffs:The nameless telephone call,the leather-bound book,the piece of paper attached to the door.
Still he’s not the only one.Rose wouldn’t be thrilled either,if she was dumped by Patrick over Sean,considering the fact she detest Sean and most important she envies their sincere long term friendship!
I Won’t Let You Have Him;a heavy threat!In a couple of weeks we’ll see who is making it.Cannot wait for Secrets 3!
Posted by Robin Hey, I love secrets 1,2 and I'm going to love secrets3. I have a prediction that sean and patrick are going to get together. I can't wait to read it. I love all your stories cause I read all your stories. I can't wait to also read denetion 11, I want to new what's to Chris and Bradon. Do they really break-up?
Posted by JoeSchmoe Ahaha Detention to 15! Yeppie!!!! Great story here.. keep up the good work.. hopefully you can get stories out.. quite anxious.. :D
Posted by Patrick J I am willing to put my money on the fact that it is ROSE that is writing the notes. Awesome story btw.
Posted by chikni hi, i am interested about the next move of patrick and waiting for more.
Posted by Paul where is secrets "1" -- don't find the first episode on hte site.
Posted by Sean i cant find secrets 1 either
Posted by Free Cell Lookup I am interested in conducting a reverse cell number search by going on the internet. I am receiving all of these cell phone calls by someone who I really don't know and am curious who they think they are calling. All types of crazy texts and messages are being left on my voice mail and it is starting to drive me insane. And so, where can i find these reverse phone lookup sites?
Posted by Alex Can someone please give me the link to part 1 of this story because I can't find it and I really want to read this story!
Posted by oreo where is secrets 1? haist i cant seem to find it, btw, detention was great.