Posted by JoeSchmoe Great story, really interesting to see who is doing all this 'crap'... like a mystery with lots of emotion and feelings. A great beginning of new story, and with detention ending soon, this'll be great :D keep up the good work on detention and secrets.. i commend you on the magnificant stories you have written and especially since you're currently writting two stories at the same time :D
Posted by magicof2004 can't believe our reward for waiting that long was only 2 parts. since you write so wounderfully i think you should get your ass on the chair and write us more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. there i said it.
NOT FAIR! You have left us hanging in a most cruel way!! This whole series is awesome. Could you find it in your heart to hurry with the next chapter? Pleeease?
David G.
Posted by Lisa Wow, now I'm hooked..... YOu left me hanging. Listen michael, I want you to write quick also, but I rather wait longer for quality. Your cool, and you have skills, keep doin what your doin.... Lata
Posted by Brianna I like the way you left us hanging. Good story, will be waiting for the next one.
Posted by Ken You are in form, Michael. Please keep writing.
I want to read chapter 4 but I won't rush you.
I know it's worth a wait!
Posted by Cod Plain breathtaking and exquisite as it was expected to be!I’m afraid with Detention in progress there’s a great possibility to neglect Secrets,which would be a crucial and major mistake!There we’ve got a splendid love thriller who gets more and more captivating with every episode!
As the plot expands new questions emerge:How and when Rose found Seans diaries and most importantly proceeded in forming the “Pious alliance” with Danny?
Danny darkens even more and reveals an intiminating,dangerous,intrigue,vengeful and malign part of his character,determined for everything.It remains a fact that he plead guilty suspiciously easy and quickly.Yet who was that guy in the toilet with him and what he asked him do to Sean?
As for Patrick the ascertainment of Sean’s homosexuality came simply from lucky-guessing,or there’s more to it?He suspects,he’s certain that Sean has deep feelings towards him,and in this case how he reached that conclusion,or he prays for it to happen?If he’s positive about Sean emotions what’s the eventuality to have read his journal or in an extreme theory to have copied some parts,since Sean observed that the handwriting often time expressed the mood he was in when he had writen that particular passage.Yet it remains an unlikely prospect.It’s a fact though that Patrick develops an interest towards Sean to the point of almost hitting on him,although he eventually frightens,regrets and draws off!His move is holded by sexual starvation,sexual experimentation,or even deeper sentiments for Sean?And most important what does represent the poster of Bugs Bunny with eyes that are missing and dagger-sharp teeth instead of buck teeth,which seems to be related highly with the e-mail Sean received?I must admit an extremelly dreadful bunny!
Yet I confirm that Patrick’s drying from Sean is the far most sexiest,hottest, enthralling,captivating love scene I’ve ever read in my life!Congratulations mate,you’ve done it again ,sincerely thank you from the bottoms of my heart!
Finally one question that seriously needs to be answered relates to the e-mail Sean received:“dark bunny” in reverse.Who is it from(a friend or an enemy),what this means(a threat,or a warning)and how does it tie up with Patrick?Danny knows Sean e-mail and Rose knows the poster;their alliance seem to clamp and amplify!
You have griped us again;in a couple of weeks I hope to get some answers.Looking forward for this to occur!
Posted by Matt Hall Hi. Really enjoyed your series of stories 'Secrets', but i got to the 5th episode and couldn't find the sixth one anywhere on this site...im dying to find what happens....pleez could you diorect me to the episode.
Posted by Cherrie OMFG!!! I can't wait to read the next installment! This is a FABLOUS story!!!
With his eight inches of meat straining at the bit, Hunt turned to face the now kneeling man, and
after sighing deeply, thrust his hips forward while offering his cock to the hot mouth of the cocksucker
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