Posted by rell20 OMG!!!!!!!! That was soooo good. That was the best story you have ever written. I can't wait until the next part. I was literally jumping around while I was reading this. I love this series.
Posted by Brianna I can't believe you left us hanging like that. Well it gives us something to look forward too. I can't wait to see what Rose and Danny have up there sleeves. Like always excellent job.
Posted by David Michael you say that I like leaving people hanging with my stories and you're just as bad!!! I love the character of Rose babe. She's devious, treacherous...bitchy! Can't wait 'till she gets whats coming to her! Keep up the good work.
David
Posted by mark so glad that they got it together finally......hope it stays that way
Posted by Patrick J Oh Lord. That was great. Can we say you're writing another part of my life? With this set of stories and your previous ones from detention .. Wow.. Are you sure you arent one of my lovers? :D
Posted by Cod Plain scrumptious and sublime this episode,as it was expected to be,not to mention evil consindering the way you finished it leaving us heat up and query about what will eventuate in the sequential.Yeah,maybe a little worried too!
So,the stud jock Patrick keeps a kind of journal too and the password to open it (we’re in 2004 after all) is…DARK BUNNY in reverse.How neat and shrwed!Yet remains the question of whom and why was sent the e-mail to Sean,and if this wasn’t Patrick in a highly unlikely attempt Sean to glean and ascertain his sentiments,who else could be acquainted with it!I’m really amused that Rose is at last out of Patrick’s life;after all being a bitch isn’t sexy at all!Bitches could get extremely dangerous,though,so I wonder what she’s up too as well!For the first time time Patrick realises and admites he has some feelings for Sean at least lust initially!He finds hard to believe that Sean’s in love with him,but deep inside he’s certain and disires for it desperately!So he makes the first move and takes things in his hands!I pray he doesn’t rue again!As for Danny I presume his repentance is as plain and sincere as…Rose’s tender,amicable and friendly feelings towards Sean and even if that was an ultra high improbability,Sean’s brainless stupid sexual encounter with Danny doesn’t discharge the high complecated situation between them nowise.What precisely was Sean thinking?I trust Patick would go crazy if he finds out!Taking into account the obvious that Sean doesn’t care or even like Danny,giving him futile expectations will intertwist worse matters among those two,making Danny eventually more hurt,used,betrayed and angry and terminally more determined for revenge and vindictive.Still it’s tough not to be compassionate and sympathetic to him,for his truly miserable,pathetic and wretched life with no love and no friends,except Sean.Ineluctably he falls hopelessly in love with him,to the point of obsession,just the way Sean seems to be with Patrick,with the exception that Danny’s love is assuredly unrequited,while regarding to Sean and Patrick their romance sprouts and thrives!I’m expecting eagerly Rose’s and Danny’s counteractions.
It was encore thriving to hear Patrick’s perspective.You accomplished the transit from the one starring character to the other effectively in both your stories.This prooves how talented writer you really are!Restively see you in two weeks time!
Posted by Cod Plain scrumptious and sublime this episode,as it was expected to be,not to mention evil consindering the way you finished it leaving us heat up and query about what will eventuate in the sequential.Yeah,maybe a little worried too!
So,the stud jock Patrick keeps a kind of journal too and the password to open it (we’re in 2004 after all) is…DARK BUNNY in reverse.How neat and shrwed!Yet remains the question of whom and why was sent the e-mail to Sean,and if this wasn’t Patrick in a highly unlikely attempt Sean to glean and ascertain his sentiments,who else could be acquainted with it!I’m really amused that Rose is at last out of Patrick’s life;after all being a bitch isn’t sexy at all!Bitches could get extremely dangerous,though,so I wonder what she’s up too as well!For the first time time Patrick realises and admites he has some feelings for Sean at least lust initially!He finds hard to believe that Sean’s in love with him,but deep inside he’s certain and disires for it desperately!So he makes the first move and takes things in his hands!I pray he doesn’t rue again!As for Danny I presume his repentance is as plain and sincere as…Rose’s tender,amicable and friendly feelings towards Sean and even if that was an ultra high improbability,Sean’s brainless stupid sexual encounter with Danny doesn’t discharge the high complecated situation between them nowise.What precisely was Sean thinking?I trust Patick would go crazy if he finds out!Taking into account the obvious that Sean doesn’t care or even like Danny,giving him futile expectations will intertwist worse matters among those two,making Danny eventually more hurt,used,betrayed and angry and terminally more determined for revenge and vindictive.Still it’s tough not to be compassionate and sympathetic to him,for his truly miserable,pathetic and wretched life with no love and no friends,except Sean.Ineluctably he falls hopelessly in love with him,to the point of obsession,just the way Sean seems to be with Patrick,with the exception that Danny’s love is assuredly unrequited,while regarding to Sean and Patrick their romance sprouts and thrives!I’m expecting eagerly Rose’s and Danny’s counteractions.
It was encore thriving to hear Patrick’s perspective.You accomplished the transit from the one starring character to the other effectively in both your stories.This prooves how talented writer you really are!Restively see you in two weeks time!
Posted by Jake Holy Freaky poo fanny!!!!!!!!!!!! Thats was the most suspensing story i have ever read in my whole life, it actually made me feal worried at one point... Credit to you, only a great author could do that to people through their storys...
Posted by Lisa Damn Damn Damn....... That was hot, I had to go turn on my air conditioner. Michael you always suprise me. I mean your series are fantastic, you really should write a book. Hey I would by it..... Anyway, you rock :) catch yall later Lisa luv..............
Posted by Travis Wow Michael, you have a amazing talent! Personally this story doesn't make excited in the sexually way but excited in a mental manner. Your element of suspense it truly remarkable, I personally love this series. You see most of the fiction I read here are stories that are about sex and well more sex, your series have lust, passion and a balance of characters. Rose is one of my favorite characters in your series she puts a element of sudpense that makes you want to read more its like a ant and broken pieces of crackers, you can't stop until you have all of it. This story is somewhat similiar to "Rainbow Boys" and "Rainbow High", Danny sounds like one of the characters from "Geography Club", this piece is one of a kind I hope you continue writing this series because as you may have known people really enjoy it. I hope we can talk someday, so take care and good luck on your future projects Michael.
Posted by Eve Absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!! What more can I say? You are, in my estimation, one of the best writer's out there for all the reasons that everyone above has pointed out. Please, please, don't leave it too long to post more. P.S. Have you ever thought about creating your own site to post your stories??
Posted by Rick hey, when are you going to submit the rest.
Posted by wow hurry up with the next story M.B. you killing me