Posted by BookerFan HOLY S$#@%!!! OMG, what are you?!? Thats the most amazing thing ever!! But yea, you really know how to write. That was grade-A drama. You really sent me into a loop at the ending. I never expected anything like that from you. Simpy amazing!
Posted by KAI OMG I LUV THIS STORY IM IN TEARS I CANT BELIVES THIS HAPPEND WOOOOOOOOOOOW
Posted by Robin OMG,I can't believe you wrote that. That was amazing. The ending was...it was...wow, it was just shocking, I couldn't believet it.It was amazing, it was simlpy amazing!
Posted by Robin OMG,I can't believe you wrote that. That was amazing. The ending was...it was...wow, it was just shocking, I couldn't believet it.It was amazing, it was simlpy amazing!
Posted by BookerFan haha rating = 4 OMG's in a row... impressive!
Posted by ian WOW!!! dont know what else to say really. can't imagine whats gonna happen next. hurry with part 6
Posted by kayn OMFG, i was actually enjoying the story until the part where danny held the gun, T.T after that i burt into tears, this is such a sad storie now T.T i would say it is amazying but in a really sad way.T.T yeah hurry with the next part, please no more deaths T.T
Posted by Todd Wow!!!!! I wasn't expecting that. Great story though and if you think about what has happended with that boi in the previous chapters it makes sense. Thank you, this is really great writing.
Posted by Lisa I Am in shock!!!!!! I really was not expecting that........WOW, I don't know what to say, you never every let me down. Damn, you really know how to write
Posted by Cod It’s sterlingly afflictive and piteous the turn of the story,not to mention the fact that we’ll have to wait almost a month for its installment!Myself in concert with your other readers are fain to make this accommodation and await for as long as it’s necessary!Excellent work needs its time;I pray though it won’t be too protracted!I must confess when I red the synopsis of this episode of the story I suspected its tragic unfoldment:an unfortunate death, Danny’s most probably, consulting his psychopathology!I’m certain that you would have been a highly effective and succesful psychiatrist or chychologist!You are a prodigious author,who granted us two scrumptious stories,which is the most important!
As for the story,Patrick is using poor Sean for sex,so far,although he’s got some feelings towards him-he got a little jealous when he heard about Danny!I’m curious to find out with who had his first male–to-male experience with!Not to mention his reaction when he’ll find out the tragic situation Sean’s got into:a Sean full of guilt for Danny’s dolorous death.Heretofore Sean ungrudgingly gave out of love everything to Patrick with nothing in exchange from him, not even a kiss after their lovemaking!I trust that Sean’s cherry merited some affection from Patrick,at least a kiss!
The story get’s fairer and fairer,every episode!Keep up the sublime work!
Posted by In2hide That was indescribable. It was a great part 5. i can't believe that happened. It just completely caught me off guard. It would be awesome if you could keep writing more and more on these stories. Thanks for being such an amazing writer.
Posted by Kat Hey Mike, when's Secrets 6 coming out??
Posted by Cod Michael it’s almost 6 weeks,my impatience grows thick!Reading the story over and over again I trust that Danny couldn’t find a harder,crueler,more dreadful and paradigmatic way to keelhaul,chasten,avenge and reciprocate over Sean!I just wonder if Sean will get in even more trouble by taking Danny’s gun and eventually be accused for homicide,albeit fighting his remorses will be his far from worst retribution!Poor guy!
The story reminds me of an ancient Greek tragedy and I’m wondering about its Nemesis!By the way,I never fully understood how Sean with just a thin towel around his waist in Secrets 4,got suddenly fully dressed in Secrets 5;yet,since this binds so smoothenlly with the plot (it’s extremely hot that Patrick waits for Sean to strip before fully undressing himself and begining their love-making) no hard feelings for this minor disregard!Could Danny had been Patrick’s first,plain to hurt Sean,destroy his fantasy over Patrick and eventually debunk him in Sean’s eyes?All these questions and many others emerge, enhancing our interest and anxiety!
Therefore please hurry up with the new installment,I can hardly wait!
Posted by monique WOW!
Posted by Cherrie OH MY GOD!!!!!!! I was literally paralyzed reading that ending! not expecting that dude!! Are you a published author? you should really look into that. I was confused with the beginning though cause at the end of story 4 Patrick came when Sean was in the shower and he was wearing nothing but a towel, and then suddenly in this one he has a shirt and tshirt on like the shower never happened...but that ending totally made up for the minor inconsistency.
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