Posted by anthony Awesome!!! I'm hooked and want to read more
Posted by Pat I love your story so far :) Hurry up with Part II!
Posted by john when are you going to post the 2nd chapter? Pls hurry up. :c and pls dont kill mark on this story like u did on your other story.
Posted by taurus oh my god.....this would make a great movie. i think i'm inlove with Alan and Mark
Posted by lee oh man its really wonderful...... Though theres no sex on it.....still I really likd it... No i love it really... Cant wait for chap 2. Sorry man i just cant tell u everything i wanted to say bec my englich is limited u know... Lol... Anyway i leave in the philippines.. And im closeted... For ur info... Lol
Posted by David Bula THanks guys for the comments...i alreay posted ch 2 but it takes a while before the story is available to the public so keep on checking
Posted by Frank Awesome story, as a 56 yo, it had my emotions very high.
Posted by orion very good story, moving and quite dramatic, but i love it