Posted by John Smith No! You can not end the story like that its so unfair to the readers! Haha. Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter!
Posted by Michael I hope it turns out good! Like CORY from the ALPHA team shot Mohammed instead Mohammed shot Adrian.. I kinda believe that's going to happen.
Posted by Nick David you are killing us with this ending! :) but I love this story one of the best I think. I love how your stories are not just sex but love passion emotion and action. Keep up with fantastic work. Please post next one soon!! I hope Adrian didn't die because this story is way too good and has so much potential to end now. Great job man!!
Posted by Charles Omg , Your Story is amazing ! i read it at least 6 times from the 1st to the 5th chapter , please make an ending . your an excellent writer & i hope that you've become succesful . i love thios story so much :)
Posted by Allen Adrian, Mark, Jennifer, and Alan better not die!! Very good series!! Keep them comming!
Posted by taurus mohammed is adrian's friend, he loves him, that's why he gave him those films 2 watch....so i hope he does'nt kill him. Damn I Love this story.....that cocky soldier Cory sounds interesting, can't wait to read more about him and Chapter 6 better cum out soon.
Posted by kay cee you always make leave us in suspense. Great story! Cnt wait to see what happens next..
Posted by Giffy OMG what happens next??you seriously have to write another one soon
Posted by Giffy OMG what happens next??you seriously have to write another one soon
Posted by Chris Your stories are captivating. You're a great writer. You're the best on this site, the very best. Never stop. I'm waiting for the continuation, hope it would be soon.
Posted by Annissa All of ur stories make cry.
I was a tough cookie but now i am a big softie.
I love how your stories are more emotional than full of sex.
Keep it going.
Posted by Annissa All of ur stories make cry.
I was a tough cookie but now i am a big softie.
I love how your stories are more emotional than full of sex.
Keep it going.
Posted by nathan when is chapter 6 going to be done i can't wait to find out what happens!!!
Posted by smithy OMG! please post the next one soon, this story is Great!
Posted by Sean This story is truly amazing. I love it, I can not wait to read the next one!
Posted by luis i am with nick this story is amazing for all what happens, tragedy, love, its all part of what a really good story needs!!
Posted by Nick When is the next one David?! We are all waiting on your amazing stories. You've got us all addicted
Posted by David Bula Hey sorry guys been busy this week but I am half way done chapter 6 so I should summit it by today or tommorrow. Thanks for the comments guys you are the best : )
Posted by Jimmy Dude these stories are great.. The ending is a real shocker., please write the next chapter soon. Don't keep us waiting to long
Posted by Ian Please post the next chapter. I can't wait anymore. One the best stories here, thanks for sharing it.
Posted by jc palma this story is super amazing I HATE DAVID BULA BECAUSE OF THIS I AM BROKEN HEARTED FOR ALMOST A WEEK NOW i wish it has part 2 i love to reread it a hundred times
Ralph groaned again as he sucked on John’s tongue. His cock was throbbing rapidly now and he could feel his balls aching with the need for release. He would try to wait for John but he wasn’t sure if he would make it...