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Soldiers Story: Chapter 5 reviews

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Posted by John Smith

No! You can not end the story like that its so unfair to the readers! Haha. Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter!

Posted by Michael

I hope it turns out good! Like CORY from the ALPHA team shot Mohammed instead Mohammed shot Adrian.. I kinda believe that's going to happen.

Posted by Allen

Adrian, Mark, Jennifer, and Alan better not die!! Very good series!! Keep them comming!

Posted by taurus

mohammed is adrian's friend, he loves him, that's why he gave him those films 2 watch....so i hope he does'nt kill him. Damn I Love this story.....that cocky soldier Cory sounds interesting, can't wait to read more about him and Chapter 6 better cum out soon.

Posted by kay cee

you always make leave us in suspense. Great story! Cnt wait to see what happens next..

Posted by Chris

Your stories are captivating. You're a great writer. You're the best on this site, the very best. Never stop. I'm waiting for the continuation, hope it would be soon.

Posted by Sean

This story is truly amazing. I love it, I can not wait to read the next one!

Posted by luis

i am with nick this story is amazing for all what happens, tragedy, love, its all part of what a really good story needs!!

Posted by Nick

When is the next one David?! We are all waiting on your amazing stories. You've got us all addicted

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