Posted by wholegrain Thanks for uploading chapter 7 David! Can't wait for chapter 8.
Keep up the good work :) you rock!
Posted by ian I love it!!! But I thought this chapter was too short. Hurry back with ch 8!!! Thanks, great work man!!!
Posted by Chris B I like this one, it adds a twist we or I did not see coming!
Posted by Ian NOOOOO MARK WHYYYYY!?!?! :(
Posted by smithy OMG, i dont beilve that Mark would do that! please write the next one very very soon, x
Posted by John Smith Don't jump to conclusions! So many things that could be happening other than a relationship. Let's give Mark the benefit of the doubt.
Posted by Joe This is just amazing. I can't wait for chapter 8 just as I was waiting for 7! Keep it up David!
Posted by Luis OMG this was just great but why will the next one be the last? dont do that!
Posted by Giffy I really cant wait to see what will happen next,please write the next one soon
Posted by John Pls pls pls get Adrian and Mark back together, I'm really really looking forward to the last chapter!!! Thx a lot for all ur stories!!!
Posted by Charles Moody That Last Part Almost Made Me Cry ! Pleasee Finish ! 3 .
Posted by Charles Moody Pleasee Finish 8 !
Posted by jon Write the final chapter!!! Sooo good. I love the plot, the setting, the people, the mood. Keep it up!
Posted by Anonymous Please, hurry up and get on with that final chapter!! I want to know what happens to Adrain and who he ends up with!!!!!!
Posted by David Bula Just to let you guys know that i have summitted the final chapter. it's under review now and should be up in a couple of days.
Posted by CoryAndAdrianNeedToHaveSex Has it been uploaded yet D: ?
Posted by erik You should write vampire fiction now
Posted by Kay Cee We've been waiting for months now! What's the delay with the final chapter?
Posted by David Bula Don't know I submitted the story about a week ago
Posted by Ian I think I'll all be worth wait :)
Posted by Ro David, you're just brilliant .. I love how you manage to capture and express every emotion .. While I was reading your other story named "A Story", the song 'Pictures of You' by Angie Hart started playing on tv .. I dont know what happened but I just lost all control and started bawling my eyes out .. You're awesome .. It was a pleasure reading your stories and I cant wait for the next one :)
Posted by Danny YOU.R.AMAZING!