Posted by bp wow
Posted by ghese too good story, but you have to write one more part for this.. john find one nice boy friend and stay with him life long..
Posted by MHSasko WOW! Bravo.... Matt, you've got mre twists and turns that a pretzel. The game! Bravo... and Thanks!
Posted by Gary This was incredible, but I am a believer in some sort of revenge. Please you just have to write one more chapter. Let John at least get even with those two. Please
Keep writing you have a nice style.
Posted by Jankyn Marry me Matt roberts, i love you!!! Hahaha. Seriously though your stories are sensational never lacking in drama, suspence and intrigue. People who came up with such fast pace stories usually have boring lives themselves, i hope thats not the case with you. Keep writting i'll read and review...
Posted by Jankyn Marry me Matt roberts, i love you!!! Hahaha. Seriously though your stories are sensational never lacking in drama, suspence and intrigue. People who came up with such fast pace stories usually have boring lives themselves, i hope thats not the case with you. Keep writting i'll read and review...
Posted by Nick SERIOUSLY WOW..
Damn u can write. One f da mst intrigin stories vr. Gr8 sense f surprise totly got me off gaurd.. Nd dats sayin sumthn..hahaha
aniws lik othrs i wld also lik it if u wld at least gve one or mre chaptrs to it. Mst f us blve in love so its hard to ci sum1 so heartbrokn. Ope u cntinue nd bring john to justice...
Posted by dude I love the story. You are an amazing writer. Would have liked just a little more detail on the sex though.
Posted by dude I love the story. You are an amazing writer. Would have liked just a little more detail on the sex though.