Solitary Spider

(Part 1 from 2. Fiction.)

 Thank you for reading my first story Changes and thanks for the reviews!! For those who read it I am thinking of writing the sequel.

Hope you enjoy this one!

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1. Shuffling the cards

“I love you.. please!” John cried to the intercom. “Please forgive me, please, please!” he begged. No answer from the other side. The cold outside felt even colder as John stood begging to the intercom, begging for the person on the other side to let him in, begging for forgiveness.
“Just… go. Leave me alone” a cold voice finally answered. John trembled as he heard he was no longer on the other side. John rang the buzzer over and over... but nobody picked up. He cried as he collapsed on the building stairs.

Two Weeks Earlier…

John walked in the club followed by his boyfriend James; both men inevitably would make both women and men crazy. John was leaner than his boyfriend, but as a result of rigorously going to the gym he was very cut, and his firm, strong body was evident by the tight black shirt he was wearing. He also wore tight, dark blue jeans that exhibited his perfectly round bubble butt.

James was more ripped than him, and had a wider, cut back and had a small, cut waist. He a head shorter than John and had an even more perfect bubble butt.

What both men had in common besides an amazing body, was a perfect face. John had a smooth, white skin, and his face almost seemed to glow. His hair was black as well as his eyes. His friends would sometimes call him vampire John; he even was as piercing and hypnotizing as a vampire would be.

James skin was a little darker… he was tanned because he went surfing almost every weekend. His eyes were dark brown and his hair was dark blonde. John and James made a very hot couple, and as they walked across the crowded club, all eyes were on them.

Two hours went by after John and James joined their group of friends, everyone was drunk except for John… it took a very large quantity of alcohol for John to get drunk.

Both John and James were now dancing shirtless in front of their screaming, drunk friends. James wasn’t much of a dancer but John was exceptional. If you didn’t like his looks (which was impossible), his sexy moves would do the trick.

“Gotta pee” John shouted. James spanked John’s butt and continued moving to the beat of the electronic music.

John’s perfect body moved slowly and sensually across the club to get to the bathroom, again making everyone turn his way.
John and James had been dating for about eight months, which was new for John since he was more of a one night stand kind of guy. But being with James had gotten comfortable, he was used to being with him. But did he love James? That was the question that was always on his mind.


“Sorry” John said after he bumped into a guy that was coming out of the bathroom. His eyes shone as he looked at the guy in front of him. He was just a little shorter than him, had blonde hair and light brown eyes. His skin was white, not as white as John’s but almost beige. He couldn’t really see his body but what had petrified John was what happened when he made eye contact with the guy. Never had he felt that, he had a tingly sensation in his chest; it was almost like butterflies going mad inside his chest. The guy gave him a sexy, half smile that made the butterflies go insane.

“Do I know you?” the guy asked with a perfect, white smile.

“I don’t know” John smiled nervously.

“Wait, are you John Nazetti!”

“Yeah, you are?” John was intrigued.

“I think we’re blocking the way in” the guy said gently pulling John aside. Electricity shot through John’s arm when the guy touched him.

“I’m Will! Remember we went to high school together?” the guy smiled and suddenly John remembered.

“God yeah! Of course I remember. How you’ve been? I didn’t know you were gay”

“Yeah me neither... found out about two years ago” he laughed. “Hey I gotta run but we should meet sometime, give me your number”

John gave him his number with a bright smile and then stared at the back of Will’s body as he walked away. He had a broad back and a tight, mouth watering bubble butt.

John walked inside the bathroom with the butterflies still fluttering in his chest, excited about meeting Will, and oblivious to how that night had changed everything.

While driving back home that night, John remembered Will in high school. John was by no means unpopular; he was funny and sociable and was also attractive, even though he wasn’t really built. And everyday John would drool when he saw Will. He was the typical jock; built,hot, hung,sexy and an idiot who would fuck every girl in school.

When John jerked off to the thought of gorgeous Will, he would wish that someday Will would be gay and they would end up together. He smiled at how his wish came true six years later. James moaned from the back seat, interrupting John’s thoughts. He turned to see his unconscious boyfriend and his smile disappeared. He was so lost in his thoughts of Will that he had forgotten all about James. They had been together for almost a year and a half; he couldn’t tell if he loved James or not, but he had gotten used to being with him, and he cared a lot for him; James was his best friend.

As John stared silently at the dark and lonely road in front of him, he struggled to bury Will deep inside his mind.

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