Posted by Josh awww, this is so horrible yet sweet. Please write more
Posted by R.J. wow, I've read all three parts of this story and it is very compelling...this part is by far the most revealing, it's almost so real. your story telling is amazing...it's very well scripted and thought out as to what will happen next, the character Storm is like the level-headed one, and Michael, though more experienced is the unwilling victim, yet they compliment each other so well. Good job, Simon! Yours,