Posted by Romeo Great story but what happened to Mitch and Jay? Are they going to be the next Michael and Storm? I think you can make a great series with Jay and Mitch.
Is Michael and Storm going to college or do something with their life? If they go to college, will Jay and Mitch go to the same college?
I think you should do a series on Jay and Mitch. May you can the four together and like having two different stories in one. Where Jay and Mitch is helping Michael and Storm with a situation and vise versa.
Keep writing but I really think you should do a series on Jay and Mitch. I like to know more about them.
Posted by Brennan That was an amazing story. Very well written, hope you write about them again. ;)
Posted by Joshua R Freaking Awesome!! I've never read a story with such heart and soul. You are a great author and should either try and continue writing this story with all the people or start a new one. If you tried to get this published i think you would get straight in the door. I am hopeful to see more stories in the near future.
Posted by Joshua R Freaking Awesome!! I've never read a story with such heart and soul. You are a great author and should either try and continue writing this story with all the people or start a new one. If you tried to get this published i think you would get straight in the door. I am hopeful to see more stories in the near future.
Posted by girltemporary9 Hey, I started reading Something True at Hothomo100 and you made me curious. I have to say that I like the way how your story develops. I hope to see more stories by your hand. Hopefully you write about Michael and Storm & Mitch and Jay!
Posted by Mark I love this story I love you yay !!!
Keep writing what happenes in the other countries
Posted by aaron I think that this was amazing. I loved it you sould continue wit jay and mitch. Maybe a foursome storm michael jay and mitch
Posted by Zacary Oh my god your story made me cry alittle cuz thats what i want except without the rape and death. :)
Posted by jay Simon this story is amazing!! U did such a great job writing it! Keep it up man....
Posted by Anders Broen you must write more it is truly amazing!!!!!!
Posted by shawn that was a great story. well written. i really enjoyed it. Please write more. By far the best story i have read on here.
Posted by Paige I wanted to complamint you on ur story it was so good. I loved how there was an acutual story line to this and not just sex. I would love for u to write some more.
Posted by Mitch Wow, my favourite story on here by far, partially because im an aussie, my boyfriend is called jay and im my name is mitch. Hence why i think WE NEED MORE MITCH AND JAY! :)