Posted by Negash that is fucking ace, i love John Shepard. So glad u didnt use McKay, arrogant prick that he is, well u got to love the canadian bastard hes bloody smart. Just think u shud have more of the characters in it. not for sex, just to add more fact to it. So it makes these stories feel like they are simply an X-rated storyline. I was thinking of doing an Atlantis story, with John (Joe Flanagan is so Uber hot) but i prefer urs over mine.
Posted by cruel_boy hey....... its a very nice story... i really like it....how about introducing another charecter.. someone very very young... n doing a threesome action... ur story is a bit simple n short... n i like it that way.. good job mate !!! im hoping 2 c the 3rd. ( if can... make the new charecter's age around 14 or 15, better if younger then that. ... i like young boys... smooth and skinny ... hmmm just talking like this makes me dripping cum like never before.... bye dude !)
Posted by retto nice one...
Posted by JasonIndpls The next story will be longer, it'll actually have a story line revolving around something that'll happen where this one left off. I'm trying to stick close to the real show. There will be other characters added to the story. Those characters will be take from SG1 (in a crossover type story) or from Atlantis. Email me at stories@jasonlagasse.com about which characters you'd like to see me add, or have "hook up". I'll see what I can do to accomodate.
Posted by cdf nice story. i cant help thinking about it when i watch the show and the look ford gives shepard sometimes makes you wonder. Keep up the good work
Posted by Richard Barber I have been hot for Joe Flanagan ever since the show began. This was very good. Keep it going.
Richard
Posted by sexythug dude your story is so cool. you should make more stories of stargate atlantis with lt. ford and major shepard. i enjoyed them. please continue!!!!!!
Posted by Ruud van Tintelen What a great story!
Posted by Harry This was great I cant wait to see what come next.
Joe Flanagan is so hot.
Posted by bob likeg it hope you make a new one
Posted by madrooter damm that was a good story, keep it up.. you should get colonal cameron mitchel from stargate season 9 if your gonna do a crossover, he's hot as.. later
Posted by blabla add more of these
Posted by b w hi i really really loved and got off meny times coz of ur story im a really big fan of stargate atlantis and thought it really good that u brought ford and sheperd together but i would have injoyed it more if the really fit scotish doctor was somehow involved in the bellter story
Posted by Jason I know it's been a while since I've added a story to the S&F series, but I am working on part 3, should have it done by sunday.
Posted by danny yes dats waz hot ! i waz hard da hole time ! that story got me 3 times ! when is the 3rd story cumming ! ive read this story like 5 or more times it gets me really hard every time i read it !
Posted by Kelvin Reese Please Do A Third One !!! I Am A Huge Fan Of The Show And i So love This please Please do a 3rd one
Posted by lev next part
Posted by s32ol Really good, please continue. Huge fan of the show and well now of this erotic story.
Posted by George it was a great story cant wait for the other part.
Posted by jared um I really like sga and im glad u decided to write a gay story about it...im hpoing that u could write a gay story about dr mckay...I think he's hot
Posted by Craig I went mckay in on it to
Posted by darren wow great story i cant wait for part 3
Posted by Fred Wempe HOT! John is a bad "strip" poker player. John now has to give it up!
Posted by Fred Wempe John is such a great "bitch" and needs to be taut a lesson. John's ass needs more fucking.