Posted by Hawk Lyra Damn good for your first story. Hell it was better than most other stories. Keep writing and your stories will get better, just try to use a larger vocabulary with descriptions, as you reused many terms.
Posted by john fuckin hell tell me more email me with what happened
Posted by Joshua I LOVED THIS!!
Posted by Juan Gonzalez I loved it please write more about Matt and Nick and Jared and Caleb it was great
Posted by Nick Amazing story I loved it OMG I'm going to read it again
Posted by Suomynona (Spell backwards) Hey it's the author. Well I guess I'm going to start another story now, I'm going to try and use a little different vocab, but I just hate cussing, it's uneducated. But yeah, hope you guys like this next one. Oh and it is all based off of real guys that I know :D
Posted by rhaf yeah, fantastic!!!
Posted by The Author Second one is out guys, just look for it: Straight Guys Truth or Dare 2
Posted by Unknown Dude I love the Cody part. Idk y. Maybe cuz I'm like his age!:)
Posted by Liken dat I love all of ur stories im proably like the youngest one who has read this being 14 and all and i wish that kinda of stuff would happen to me. I just recently figured out that i love gay liturature. I mite even write one my self ........ Bye
Posted by cody Its me cody thanks for comment
Posted by Aman khan That is fucking great....
Posted by jcock this is too unrealistic.
the dialogue is crap.
Posted by Gio3211 I also love the cody part cuz im also 15 lol