Posted by Sonny This is the best story I've ever read involving the capture of a straight cowboy. Just the lead up to the taking of this choice piece of cowboy beef is a bone harding experience. The authors sense of scene is remarkable, you'd think he was writing from actual life experience, and not just creating from his imagination, not that it's a bad thing to do so. The only suggestion I would make, and I do so because I'm a cowboy boot fan, is that he should include some discriptions of the cowboys clothing. Gay fans might like to know he wore his best Sunday boots, or whatever, and how it looked when rope was sinched tying the cowboys hands to his boots, etc.
But at any rate, I have to say that I have reread this story many times and never fail to do it one handed.
Posted by Gary I hope that Gil finds this man, beats the shit out of him and then rapes him with all sorts of things, very large objects. Maybe even crushing one of the mans nuts just for good measure.
I think that rape any form is disgusting. I read all 4 parts hoping that Gil would get the upper hand. Was very disappointed. That being said, your writting style is very good, rape for a story line is not.
Posted by Gus Hot! Hot! Hot! I jacked 4 times. But it could be more detail on fucking Gil if next time.
Posted by Gus Gary shut the fuck up and get lost.
Posted by Jamie Luke GREAT STORY! What I like best about Jimmy is he loves to include lots of small details along the way - the kind of things that stick in your mind when you're having fun with another guy. Many of us have fantasies about straight guys. I think Jimmy;s fantasies really get to the essence of those feelings. The forbidden fruit. Can we persuade them to give it up to us? I find many US writers put enormous stress on the sucking and skate over (or even miss out) the fucking. So it is a treat to find a guy who is not afraid to write hornily about fucking. Look forward to the next story!