Posted by jac Love it
Posted by hottmustang09 holy fucking shit!! whoever wrote this is a genious!!!
Posted by bill Great story. Good rhythym. Kept it real. Thanks
Posted by Joshua Best story i've read in a while. I was getting sick of those people who don't know how to spell correctly. Wow. That's all I have to say.
Posted by Ken That was defihitely hot. You had me going. please write more.
Posted by Mike ah man so hot...just shot my load thanks
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Posted by loyd boring
Posted by saske kun good writing, you sustained sensuality by constantly provoding small lusciousness details. if I may be critical I would, as a matter of personal taste, have liked to see more tender ellements of a "supressed" or hidden love between the characters. (What can I say, I'm a romantic.) However, your piece was good enough, and really doesn't warrant much criticism.
Posted by ccs that was hott
Posted by Dave Good story, but how did they go from a pool chair to a bed???
I finally arrived into the motel in Chicago. I was there for the annual restaurant show representing the place I worked for. Chicago and Illinois were new to me, and I was excited about checking out the bars for the first time...