Posted by me it was good. i was waiting for Danny, and it's kind of sad that it was just one chapter. it was nice though.
Posted by James I agree with "me" i wanted to know more about Danny and Jordan's relationship now that they are together.
Posted by dwc well maybe the thing bout Danny is a bit short but overall, this chapter is great. nice work!
Posted by CH That's a great story. They were all good. Too bad its the end though...
Posted by Shae fucking amazing!!! intensly amazing!!! loved the whole story accept the fact that it ended. write another chapter! that's not a suggestion, that's an order!!-lol, the story must go one!
Posted by bill A great story... Life like characters and you keep a good rhythym of sex and story line. Liked the series!
Posted by Romeo Like the series but you gave it one fucked up ending!
The final chapter should have been longer with a better ending. I think you need to write another final chapter.
Posted by this guy where does gozilla fit in on this story