Taking Ian Out reviews

MORE! Good start bro! You have a talent for writing. Its a little fast paced, but it seems it might lead to more. I like how you make your lead character think. Got to the sex kinda quick, but you indicated that was basically the idea. Many have tried to build up and fizzle out or get lost. You gave direction right off the bat and never mislead.

quite a hot story - needs to be expanded on tho - i was just gettin into it when it stopped!!! c'mon tell us what happens next .........

Taking Ian Out is really hot. It started for me when you started to dress for your first date with Ian. I was hard the moment you were and when Ian took your cock in his mouth, he had my hard cock beside it. I wanted to fuck both of you!