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Tangled - Part Fifteen reviews

Posted by Paulos
Wow. I cannot believe you did that... I don't know what you have planned, but I'm not so sure that killing off Lee was the best because you wrote about how much Lee and David are soul mates and were "created" for each other. I don't know then how you could ever let David become happy on a whim and be with someone else.
Posted by Stephon Brewster
Omg i can't believe lee died in the most important time in their lives and how is Davey or who is his next lover?
Posted by Bob
Really Bold. Kind of pissed right now. You better have a good idea on what your doing! This story is already really long and I was hoping you would end it soon because it was so good. Now you have a lot of catching up to do. Also please don't rush thought it now! You have spent to much time just to end it with an open ending. Good job so far keep it coming.
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