Posted by Daniel Hey guys, please feel free to post your criticisms/comments on here...they will be most appreciated by the author, ie. me. The second part in this story is coming soon...
"I-I know it was," Jimmy tammered, "but I didn't think you guys wanted me showing up at your parties!!!" Jake stopped up short lathering his body at that remark and strode over to where Jimmy and asked harshly, "Who ever told you that, kid!!!"...