Posted by Brandon Soooo great!! Plzzzz keep writing. Plz. :D
Posted by raffy oh my, what an action, great story. . . Do more! I love it.
Posted by andrew shevlin Best Gayle story ever definitely looking forward to part two
Posted by Brandon When will part 2 be here? I'm anxious to find out what happens next.
Posted by GlenAllen Damn! This is a really fantastic story! Please, continue with part two. I just gotta know what happens next!
Posted by marcuz This is an incredible and epic story dude, with a great structure, unique and realistic characters, and a thrilling but mysterious story. Enjoyed very much, can't wait for the next chapter =] Write me when it's post !!!
Posted by devils blues i am an absolute fan of u r work man u r awsm . plzzzz write more
Posted by khayman jones vary well written I loved it!
Posted by Angel I absolutly loved ur stories,plz keep it up ,cant waite till the next chapter of the banck ,all the best