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Posted by mark
I liked it and think it has potential. Like this rough fuckin and dirty talk.
I think it might be easier to read if you seperate the actual speech from the story and if you have a different line after each person has spoke. This way we know who is speaking when. Just a suggestion
Looking forward to part 2
Posted by ILUVBSBEB
Good start, although the description could be more graphic
Posted by david
AWESOME!!..man, that was the most erotic gay story that i have ever heard..too bad it was completely fictional though..very very graphic and i would love to read a part 2..thanx guys
Posted by Lisa
it was cool, but for some reason it sounded alot like this other series on this site. So that is what made me alittle skeptical, i'm not saying you did it on purpose, but some of the names were even the same. The dialouge is alittle confusing, though.
Posted by Brandon-Austin
Okay--So..some people may think this series sounds alot like the Detention series..but please realize this is just the first chapter, and this series is definitely going to take a much darker and different turn. (Which i know is hard to believe with what is writen so far) I'm also aware that the main charcter names are the same in both series. The Brandon in my series is going to be VERY different..trust me. But anyways, thanks so much for everyones feedback, i really appreciate it!
Posted by Gayphreak
In my experience, people tend to use the same names because certain names are considered sexy. Names like "Josh", "sean", "Kyle", "Tyson" (not all the ones in the story) seem to turn people on for some reason. Thus the reason many are the same.
Posted by Paulette
Im a serious Michael Booker fan so i reconized the similarites of the stories right off the plate. Im like Lisa im not saying u did it on purpose just make sure it DOES take a turn in the next story. Work on the dialouge. Im looking foward to the next one though.
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