The Football reviews

Good start, although the description could be more graphic

AWESOME!!..man, that was the most erotic gay story that i have ever heard..too bad it was completely fictional though..very very graphic and i would love to read a part 2..thanx guys

Im a serious Michael Booker fan so i reconized the similarites of the stories right off the plate. Im like Lisa im not saying u did it on purpose just make sure it DOES take a turn in the next story. Work on the dialouge. Im looking foward to the next one though.