Posted by mike That was a lovely story, could have done without the fish though - yuk! Lots of nice parts though.
Posted by Brandon what an amazing story!!!!
Posted by Briangrizzly This story is fucking hot, loved reading it and staying hard the whole time.
Posted by saske Arguably the best story here! I loved it. Very sensual and descriptive- wish I could write like you. Your characters are interesting and engaging and it is evident that you put some effort into their development. Gramatically the piece is fluent with a logical structure to the plot. I give you a 100%. As a matter of personal taste I did not like the emergence of female sexuality in the story line, but you did that good also. Besides, the rest of the story is so hot that I can forgive the character for almost anything. I really hope to read more of your work!
Posted by Steve The emergence of female sexuality is there because it's in the original story... that Stanton copied word for word!
Posted by Steve Thou Shall Not Steal
Posted by Patrick loved the story
made me want to suck his cock
Posted by madrooter man that was a f*c*ing great story, dont usually like reading long stories but your one sucked me in. was hard the whole story lol
Posted by Abel hi just wanted to say that this is by farr the best one yett thanks.
Posted by bobby effing loved it....would love to hear more from you
Posted by Romeo Love this story! I can see how Ace is struggling to be straight, gay, or bi. I can see the male and female emergence gives him a struggle on his sexuality. Is Ace going to get together with new macanic in chapter 2 or will he continue with the girl? Will there be a chapter 2?
Good story. Well thought out and descriptive. Can't wait for chapter 2. Are you going to write a chapter 2 for Doug Brady.
Truck driver Doug is seduced by young effeminate Carl who accompanies him to collect some equipment. A hot day, roadside repairs, shirts off and a convenient place to swim means Doug ends up driving something more his truck...