Posted by Sebastien BEST CHAPTER YET! Wow! I'm so glad you started out with Jake remembering how Sean always smiled and transitioned it to the present, brilliant! The sex was HOT HOT HOT! I'm still a bit freaked out at your knowledge of guns. Oh, and 'simply' is an adverb that modifies a verb. and 'simple' is an adjective that modifies a noun. So it should be 'simple story' instead of 'simply story.' There were a couple of that near the beginning of the chapter, but not a big deal at all when everything else is so freaking amazingly written!!!
Posted by Sebastien By the way, I'm giving it a 10!
Posted by Bradley I am so happy that everything worked out with them 2 it's like the perfect love story. GOD this is the best story i have every read u did good cant wait for more.
Posted by Ken I love this story. The sex was incredably hot. When Sean was having a feeling like he was going to mess up their relationship, does this mean that there is more to this story and some rough times are ahead?
Posted by Trigger There is definitely a lot more to the story. Jake is way too complicated of a person, and Sean seemingly too innocent to live happily ever after so soon in their lives. Besides, a couple of main characters have yet to come back into Jake and Sean's lives.
Posted by Tommie Ross I love these stories the guy named jake Reminds me of my crush--jakeb he is really rich also this is a fantastic story not JUST about sex but about the other things that come with a good relationship!
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