Posted by wow500 once again you've left me speechless and wanting more. Oh my God I'm totally in love w/ this story, I could continue to type about how well the plot is set out, or how amazing it is that the characters keep developing and suprising me at every turn. (but hell, you already know your stories are good;) I was so worth the wait, yet leaves you wanting more! Hurry w/ the next one, I might die if I don't know what happens next!
Peace
Posted by Ares I've waited so long for this story, I love these two kids. Again Again!
Posted by kamaki great job wanna read the rest of the story(ies)
Posted by jo great story!!! hurry with the next one k
Posted by jolin HURRY!!!! WHERES THEXT CHAPTER!!!!
Posted by JOHAN WOW WOW WOW WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER
Posted by jimmy NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!
Posted by mandy OMG i loved this story you need to continue it when you do PLEASE PLEASE im beging you to email me saying that you did.. i.am.in.control@hotmail.com
Posted by Sean McKormick triger please write more on sean and jake because i want to read moore of their relationship what happens next ect when i read the first one it was ironic that my name is sean and my boyfriends name is jake and his parents are fairly ritch i am also from a gay hating town just outside of frankin tenasee and we met as i got beat up pretty bad just a mile from his home he irocly he also has a helicopter and has lived over the world and lost his best friend at 11 living in worzh poland in a similar way i helped him get over the guilt that he thought he was at fault for his friends death. we have been with each other just 4 months and he dropped me for a 2 month period his parents are owners of a oil rig just off canberra we are both 18 now. and boy he likes to spend money.
Posted by jj come on triggger we miss u and need mor of this keep up the good work dude
jj
Posted by Angel From the reviews u have to admitt that u r good,actualy amazing writer so plz keep going plz tell me if u write the next chapter or another story plz :*
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Posted by Herc You are a great writer. I love this story, and I cant wait for the next. I hope it comes out soon the waits killing me.
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