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The Long Mile Shot reviews

Posted by Brian
Wow. I mean wow. that was an amazing story. I know someone who lives in Texas who reminds me of Jake, and I kindof remind myself of Sean. Can't wait to read part 2!
Posted by craigster
This was awesome!!! I did not want to stop reading and can NOT wait till the sequal. I would compare to some of the best on-going series on site. Thank you, and PLEASE keep adding to this story!
Posted by Rick
OMG a'fucking'mazing cant wait to see Jake and Sean go all out
Posted by Tony
Loved the story line and romance keep it up
Posted by M Baus
great story, hope there is more installments of it
Posted by CJ
I Cannot wait for part 2
Posted by CJ
You should write the whole story in a book
Posted by Jason Rivers
I loved it, i thought it was great, except i think how the feel in love so fast is kinda unreal but other then that it was good, I love how complex Jake is his depth is amazing you couldnt ask for a better main character
Posted by Ken
It was a bit fast on the falling in love part but other than that it is a good story. Want to read more.
Posted by Trigger
Yes I know their declaration of love happened quickly, but it will be explained in time. And to give a hint, Jake knows why but Sean doesn't. And it has nothing to do with mental or psychological problems.
Posted by GUYFROMNEWZALAND
This is great!!. . . you really should turn this into a book. . heck try find a publisher. there is a good market out there for this kind of read!. . . you have a great imagination.!
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