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Posted by Brian
Wow. I mean wow. that was an amazing story. I know someone who lives in Texas who reminds me of Jake, and I kindof remind myself of Sean. Can't wait to read part 2!
Posted by craigster
This was awesome!!! I did not want to stop reading and can NOT wait till the sequal. I would compare to some of the best on-going series on site. Thank you, and PLEASE keep adding to this story!
Posted by J. Rodriguez
I will say that this is the best first chapter I've ever read on this sight. I will say, however, that there were some confusing lines were you forgot some words. A common mistake when you type things, typing faster then your brain thinks of words. I would just ask that you proof read before submitting to avoid non descriptive sentences. But other that that small little detail it was probably one of the best stories I've ever read, even if you don't continue from here it could still be a good one shot. And I can't help but compare it to "All About Love" by David Green, as there are allot of parallels between the two, but yours is far better than that story. And unlike that story I hope you continue to write this one. Oh and hopefully you'll be able to explain the hell the title means.
Posted by Rick
OMG a'fucking'mazing cant wait to see Jake and Sean go all out
Posted by Trigger Smith
I will definitely proof read a lot better next time because I even got confused when I read what I posted. And there is definitely more to come. I don't really write in chapters and just post parts of the main story. Part one was 11 pages typed and I already have 113 pages typed and WAY more to go. And I know this is similar to "All About Love" in many aspects but I wasn't intending it to be. I loved that story so much and I want to find out what happens next. Thanks for the reviews and I'm posting part 2 SOON!
Posted by Jim
That was one of the most amazing stories I have read. Perhaps you should think of making it into abook.
Bloody amazing is all I can say.
Posted by Tony
Loved the story line and romance keep it up
Posted by M Baus
great story, hope there is more installments of it
Posted by CJ
I Cannot wait for part 2
Posted by CJ
You should write the whole story in a book
Posted by Sebastien
Great story. Though I felt the declaration of their love was a bit too early and some of Jake's actions are a bit too over the top (but I guess that's his character)...I still love reading stories with an actual plot...and your plot is great. Your description of Jake's and Sean's bodies is also very hot too.
Posted by Jason Rivers
I loved it, i thought it was great, except i think how the feel in love so fast is kinda unreal but other then that it was good, I love how complex Jake is his depth is amazing you couldnt ask for a better main character
Posted by Ken
It was a bit fast on the falling in love part but other than that it is a good story. Want to read more.
Posted by Trigger
Yes I know their declaration of love happened quickly, but it will be explained in time. And to give a hint, Jake knows why but Sean doesn't. And it has nothing to do with mental or psychological problems.
Posted by Jeffrey Runnels
I love this story. I wish i was like jake and sean with my boyfriend but ppl at my school are so homophobic. thanks for writing such a great story.
Posted by Jon
poorly written and they fall in love too fast. and jake is a very weird character. but i guess for a first time it was...ok. :)
Posted by GUYFROMNEWZALAND
This is great!!. . . you really should turn this into a book. . heck try find a publisher. there is a good market out there for this kind of read!. . . you have a great imagination.!
Posted by Alex M.
Jake kinda reminds me of my own boyfriend, including the money.
a very good story
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