How does a straight guy go from fucking girls to fucking guys in the space of mere moments?? It really doesn't make sense.
To make this a good story it needs to be more carefully thought out.
Posted by J Hey, I like your stories and i hope to see more of The Model series, Its good so far! =)
Posted by Aareon loved it need more
Posted by tom frickie i think you shouldwrite about a teenage(17) in a broken home confused about his sexuality because hes never been with a girl but he has done plenty of the with his guy friend some knights he wolud fantisise about them but he still doesnt know he thinks hes gay but he wants to be straight and when he finally goes the distint with his friend that lets him know for sure . and when he goes to school he feel as if only he is in it alone untill a exchange student from france come to his school and it was love at first sight... you can talk it from there.
Posted by Ken Just keep writimg. It is a pretty hot little number. Besides I already read the one about a 17 year old from a broken home.
Posted by paul This was a great story. 10+ Please do part 2
And can someone please get this guy Mike some scissors to cut the hair across his... He "always" has negative comments.
Posted by Jarred Wow that was amazing. lol that would be totally hot to have some uber sexy guy from a modeling agency none the less, to tell me to fuck him. That story totally just won my Labido over hahaha! But even after you stop posting stories on here, if you could, i would REALLY enjoy reading a continuation of this one. PS: a series......Do it. :P
Posted by kevin that was one of the hottest stories i have ever read!!! i need more!!!!!!!! mabey you could write about some football lovers haveing hot sex in the locker room, when there coach walks in and joins them!!! that turns me on, or mabey wrestlers?? there spandex outfits are SEXY!!!
Posted by eric That was a bogus story..obviously fabricated.nice imagination =)
Posted by Gary This could turn out to be a really hot series. Hope you continue on with this one.
I like the way that you write, your descriptions of the characters is great.
Posted by Gary Also I think that he should be a total top. Maybe one as a bottom just so he knows how it feels to the bottom when he is the top. Kinda rounds him out.
Posted by Nick I loved this story so much i now have a sticky mess to clean up can't wait for part two