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Posted by mark
great story so far, can't wait for the next chapter
Posted by me
hehe... its cool... hmmm, lets see... motivation... sex? =P the story is going great.
Posted by Hunter Niall
So Far this is the best story i have read because al of the other stories are just all about sex, sex and more sex as though this one is actually explaining something that has ahppened and quite honestly i find it very interesting.
Posted by Madeline
WOW! Pretty good. I like the whole plot. Keeps me reading. Very interesting and real. It's not flat out its bumpy and makes you think like the character. Keep em cuming. :) LOL. But ya really good. Your pretty talented. I like how its not completely about sex and that it has some substance to it. Well I give you a 10 on a scale 1 to 10!
Posted by crystal
i love it , it is a pretty amazing story, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Posted by kristal
i love the story it was amazing would love to read the next chapter
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Posted by Bradley
GOOD STORY SO FAR. I LIKE THAT IT DOESNT START OUT WITH SEX LIKE ALL THE OTHER STORY'S. SO PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE STORY CAUSE IT SEEMS LIKE A REALLY GOOD STORY.
Posted by wow500
04-23-08
whats up...
so far the story is very expalitory, which i like, but it's still relatively vague. tell more of his conflicts, exaggerate the protaganist, make the audience hate the antagonist...what make a good fictional story is how well you make the reader relate to the hero as well as how much you make them hate the villian/problem they are facing-after all what good was Aladin w/o Jafar.i understand that u want to leave the reader wanting more(its one of the things i like about u'r work)but make them wonder. and w/ that said plz hurry w/ the next story... But u know what the funny thing is? i have no clue if u wrote this reciently... LOL keep up the good work and dont get bummed if people dont leave u reviews. it usually just means they are to lazy to write them, i've read 100's of stories from this site and i can count how many reviews i've left on 1 hand ;)
Posted by James
Make anthor one
Posted by Rosy
The story is really cool man love the whole doubt as to whether he's hallucinating or not. So is he gonna be like some mutant or keep hallucinating? And how's he gonna plunge into the gay world?
Posted by Rosy
Hey Hunter Niall, can you hook me up@ johnsolos4076@yahoo.com
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