Posted by Brad Smith A great story, by a clearly great writer!
Posted by Ken Excellent story and very well written. A lot of detail went into this story because it made me feel like I was part of it. If writing isn't your profession then it should be. This is one of the best stories that I have reasd on this site.
Posted by ivan i like this man really good when are u gonna finish it gets me hot every time i read it
Posted by jan what a great why to start the story and ending it,, even the body of the dtory was magificent. IT is detailed to high expectations and its deliverance of a sexual escaped will continue for ever with me. May you write more and succed to great measuress. Thanksz Janjan