Posted by Adam Brilliant as usual Arun, I really really enjoyed this story. You must have heard this before but are you ACTUALLY still in high school?! The reason I ask is because I can't comprehend how someone so young could write as convincingly as you do. Brilliant graphic sex and a believable and cute story line. Thumbs UP :) please continue.
Posted by Richard Really hot story, great author. Keep it up
Posted by Alex That was amazing!!! Wow is there any truth behind this story? Please please write a follow up to this
Posted by chingy gosh passion and love...love this one
Posted by Joshy Wowwwww this was good bro. This Nicolo guy sounds like a knockout
Posted by Zac OMG this was amazing!! Agree with the other comments entirely.I could totally imagine being there
Posted by Jay Please write more this is one of the best stories I've read. Did any of this happen in real life?
Posted by Asher Best new writer, I love you and your work Arun!! You blended the sex and passion perfectly here. Btw, good luck with your gcse coursework :)
Posted by Sammy Absolutely loved it! Very sexy and descriptive. You obviously have a talent in writing. I must say that this is one of my favorite stories on this site! :D
Posted by Raph I'm so happy there's an author on this site who's decided to stick to traditional romance rather than adding all these supernatural things like vampires. Great story man
Posted by Jonah This is amazing Arun! You're definitely my favourite author now :D you must have heard this before, but you write amazingly for a 16 year old
Posted by Dean A rare blend of of tenderness with hot sex..such a good writer. Hope you continue this and the Arun and Austin series. From Dean in Aus
Posted by Michael Booker Well-written. I liked it.
Posted by Arun Torrentino Thanks for all the comments guys :) I really apprexiate feedback.
Posted by Adrian I read the comments before the story and realised that a sixteen year old had just been rated by Michael Booker...quite an achievement. Beautiful story, I could totally relate because I've been on the train from Rome to Venice and that takes you through the Tuscan landscape. Nicolo's character was described superbly :) hope to hear more stories from you soon Arun. I expect to see your name on the cover of a book a few years from now!
Posted by Sean So awesome it was cute and sexy, very good
Posted by Clark A refreshing change from the rest of the stuff on here. Good job, please write a sequel
Posted by Kyle Very good story hmm I wish somethin like this could happen to me :)
Posted by Camron Da Souza Superb, absolutely amazing description. This is very different to your other series. That seemed a bit typical, you know the falling in love with best friend thing etc etc. But this!! Wow
Posted by orion good story, cant ardly wait for the next part
Posted by nickf It would be better if you fucked:)Did you?We all do and the details are fun :))Was he a virgin?Did he end up liking it?Most guys seem to;may be upset,but when they cum it is confusing
Posted by Rory Please write a second part
Posted by Baptiste Love, love, love this one. Rated it 10. Did any of this happen?
Posted by Alexandros Woweee!!! Super hot. Amazing description. I love italian guys. Second part coming soon??
Posted by oscar PLEASE HURRY UP WITH THE SECOND PART I'M DYING.
Posted by Jimmy Arun, You write with a maturity well beyond your years! This is a full head and shoulders above most of the stories on this website. I hope you write a second part. I'll be sure to read it.
Posted by Hugh Arun, please say you've written the second part and are going to upload it soon?
Posted by John O'brien This is AMAZING you have such a talent this story ♥_♥ please write a follow up xx !
Posted by Eric C SOOO GOOD!!! Makes a change from all the vampire shit and other fantasy stuff on here. Such a good writer
Posted by Simon DUDE did you die? Please write more of both series!!!!!
Posted by Seb Superb story Arun. Good luck with your gcse's as well (Y)
“It’s been too long.” Dylan pressed close to Tom’s body, enjoying the surge of arousal that shot through him as he felt Tom’s hardness against his own. He reached down and stroked Tom through the thin denim jeans he wore. “You turn me on big time,” he whispered as his lips nuzzled Tom’s...