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The Truth about Love Songs Chapter 2 reviews

Posted by Ken
I must say this is an outstanding story. I really got lost in it. The grammer was improved over the first part. Can't wait for the next part.
Posted by ryan
This story rocks!! I can't wait for more. I get so lost in the story, its great! one of the better storys I have read. the first part had a lot grammer errorsin it but the second imporoved a lot! Get the next part out soon!!!
Posted by Trace
Excellent story, plot, character development and most of all great imagination! I'm an obsessive reader of all type of literature including sexual stories but I must say this was one of the best if not THE best series I've read and it's confusing because you've only done two stories. I don't want to seem rude but I believe your talent should be spread out more widely to public eye maybe in newspaper or even writing short stories and publishing them. I don't know how old you are or what situation you're in but definitely go into this career of writing! Again kudos for the very imaginative story and one piece of advise again like everyone else is re-read the story and edit it a couple of times before submission.
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