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The Two of Us reviews

Posted by Mike
This is an ok story - but why did it just stop dead?? It needs to be finished off!!
Posted by Bob
Great story. It so reminds me of my first time which happened with my best friend. Nothing beats recalling your first experience and the high level of excitement you never feel exactly the same way again. Well done, MacDonald.
Posted by Mar-Mar
pretty good. I was had for most of it
Posted by chris
loved it what happen next
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