Posted by Ken Good story but you could have taken your time with it. Well written but hurried.
Posted by seymour cox Kind of short, but I still liked it!
Posted by Mikey You started off fine. You started building to a good story. All of a sudden we went from anticipation to it was over. Where did you get the nerve to go through with it? My advice: slow your roll and live the moment again. Hell, you might even work yourself up reliving it in your mind. ;)
Posted by Jeff MacDonald I liked the story. Short, sweet,to the point and most importantly, very believable. Good Job!
Posted by Sexy boi Good story but u knw it could b a lil longer in the end Ian sure we would all love details
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