Posted by Lucas This is the saddest hottest story ever!! 3 it's definetly my fav!!
Posted by jonathan You made me cry, but it was good! Plz make more
Posted by Erick James i like this story best one i have ever read...
Posted by Nohbdy Omg!! I cried so hard!! This doesn't need to be on a site like this!!!! You need to write a book!!
Posted by Nohbdy This has been the only story to make me legitly cry my eyes out. Is was written so well. Sutch passion and love was between you two that I just hysterically cried when I read the last bit. It needs to be a whole book (of course dulled down erocitca department) but even that was beutiful and passionate. Words can't even describe my feelings right now. I truthfully is to good for a site sutch as this.
Posted by mike wow im crying i love this story but breaks my heart too
and i love secondhand serenade too... u r a great writr :)
Posted by mike wow im crying i love this story but breaks my heart too
and i love secondhand serenade too... u r a great writr :)
Posted by Adrian Amazing!:):)Thanks!!
Posted by Alexiis Wow ii love iit iits so amaziing please make another one !.!.!.!.! ii want them to liike meet up agaiin.!!.!!.!.!.!.!.!.! Please.!!.!.! :D
Posted by Marcuz That was down right beautiful =]
Loved This Story !!!
Posted by joe oh my god this is the best story i have ever read i didnt want it to end you are in my opinion the best author ever
Posted by Brian This story is so good but it makes me want to know more, Harvard isn't that far from NYU and you should definatly continue it
Posted by nick this is a reallly beautiful story. i love it so much
Posted by Zachary Ross Man this was a touching storie makes me think of who I'll fall in true love with, still lovely an touching storie
Posted by DOA This is the best story ever in this entire site. You should totally make a book with about 18 looooonnnngg chapters lol. I kept reading the part where Donovan gets buzzed over and over again! I cried so long I think I might have dried out my tear glands lol. You have to make another version of this story with a happy ending(PLEASe;)) if not make more stories similar to this. Thanx!
Posted by Kamaki WTF?!?!?!?
Posted by DanielHottz Love this story so much!!!!!!!! So passionate!!!!! I have to tell you I cried please make a book!!!!!! I love your writting!
Posted by freind hello michael.......i don't geting words to expres me........bat can we be friends..............i love to have u as my friend.......ur friend vinod...it pure..
Posted by vinod i can understand u.....u have dowon good thing to post this story hear to realyze its not sex its love....t.c ur friend
Posted by jay i wanna make friend w/ you !! i mean the author.. pls.. i just wanna ask u something sir michael.
jay.
Posted by Jason S. I don't know what to say ! that's amazingly beautiful ! :) and it seems like it's real, so you had a great luck !
Posted by fernando I love this story I am bisexual and I loved it I cried so much thank you very much you have changed my life I learned to not be ashamed of my sexuality I would really like to talk to you so if you have an email adress please give it to me and I hope you are okay and I think you should date him again
Posted by Hiileos OMG, this story is so touching and it was totally awesome. I really love it, the best story I've ever read. please, make a part two of this story. I really wanted to read it again. :')
Posted by Alex this was a great story since it's actually about love not sex I found myself like Donovan so you must be happy with the memories you could have made things work and still pursued what you wanted to do, perphaps why not rekindle a relationship with him? It seems like you were genuionly in love and it could turn out to be great and also any chance of you telling us where Donovan is? I wouldnt mind getting a checkup from him when he's a doc...lol
Posted by josh hendickerson OMGOSH I LOVE THIS STORY ITS SO HOTT & SWEET, but its almost TOO goood to be TRUE but im dieing too see wat ya'll look like, he sounds soooo fine, this story madd me hot & horny!! (i hope yu didnt lie about it) but i wanna get sum hot possiante sex lik frm this guy i didnt wit lik 3 times but he wnt giv it up anymore, hes married n has lik 5 kids but i try everything to get him to giv me sum but he says no but im try to conviece him tonite thn were in lik 2 differnt towns so its hard but im horny all tht time but aim me [kidifr3sh] or email me [joshhend16@yahoo.com]!! i wuld luv to hav sum1 to tlk to bout my sex thoughts! (CONTACT ME PLEAZ) = ]
Posted by Nohbdy You should todally go after him after youve achived your goals! The best thing about love is it can wait. I still get teary when i think of this story. i made two of my friends read it and they cried too! more! it made me realise what true love is!
Posted by Prateep dude...u made me cry wen i was readin ur story...its so sad dat u nd donovan had to leave each other...i dunno y...y u ignored him afterwards wen u were in luv wid him....if he's single den it means he still luvs u...donovan is gud at hidin his feelings for u as he did d same for d three yrs in d school...bt i m sure he still luvs u...go back to him...u both r made for each other:-)
Posted by Nick This is the most beautiful and saddest story I've ever read I think you two should find a way to be together that's what I would do if I loved someone that much. I think this story is amazing and thank you for writing it. Thank you :) it touched me I cried and smiled throut the entire story especially at the end :(
Posted by Nick Please have them meet again that would be amazing
Posted by Jay Everyone, this is an amazing story that was written beautifully. Please keep in mind that he said that it was 100% fiction which means that he made it up. Don't delude yourselfs thinking it's real. With that being said, yes, he really should write a novel or more short stories like this one. Very touching.
Posted by BB that was the best story i have ever read!
Posted by Stephen wow that was a really good story :D
Posted by Brandon Wow great story. My heart hurt too at the end. You should of kept him cuz he obviously loved u alot. U dont get that very much in life. I hope i can find someone like him. :)
Posted by Lew Nooooooooooo!! Whyyyyyyyyyy?! Nooooooooooooooooooooo!! Oh my gooosssshhhh!! I hate the ending!! It makes me sooo sad im ballin.. GREAT STORY THOUGH!! i absolutely love it!
Posted by millosh liked ya brainz!!! sure 4 dat u aint happy wid ur life ...cool sty dreamer ...
Posted by shawn wow i cried at the end of that story it was great sad ending but it was very good u should write a novel u are a very good writer still crying........ Very good story
Posted by Santhu You made me cry, whatever...
I liked this story very much, its my NO: 1 favourite story..
Write more...
Wish u all the best..
Posted by 123 Wow! That was amazing, I'm 14 now and bisexual I'm dating a girl I like but have always been curious but too shy to come out. This has really opened my eyes thx
Posted by 123 Wow! That was amazing, I'm 14 now and bisexual I'm dating a girl I like but have always been curious but too shy to come out. This has really opened my eyes thx
Posted by Brad Can I add u on facebook?
Posted by Ryan Omg I love this story it made me cry soo much I'm deciding if I'm straight or gay right now and I just love this story I tear up every time I think about it you have to make more please.
Posted by Zion Weathers That was the most beautiful story i read so far. that sex scene had me ready to blow a load [lol] i wish i could find someone like Donovon!
Posted by kayson i loved it my name is kayson and i'm bi and wont to know if gay sex is fun. my number 6179804655
Posted by KD this was a really awesome story, i just don't understand something.. you guys had like a fairy tale, and if you can find something like that when you're so young, than why let him go? it was really mature and admirable to encourage him to pursue his career and you your own, but you both were made for each other. please don't let him go ! i hope one day you both find each other again :) p.s. i'm glad you had the balls to talk to him your sophomore year because i think it changed his life forever haha just a thought :P p.p.s. your writing is too good for a place like this haha
Posted by Cptn Guy Brilliant story-telling, just a pity it had 2 end so sad.
Posted by Baby cerafin Donovan shouldve fight for his love to michael.. I hate tragic stories..but i love this,but still wants this to be a happy ending!
Posted by ohlan is this real? goodness, u're great. want to read another story from u. gosh, u're like nicholas sparks
Posted by Michael Oh my god! This is just awesome, I love your guys' feedback it's greatly appreciated 3 I'd love to share more but I can't, really, I haven't seen him, and sorry it ended sadly but thats just life. However moreover I am working on the story of our prom night because that was another passionate day for us. I hope you'll like it.
Posted by Fernando Aguirre Omg I love this story it almost made me cry it is so well told hope to read some more stuff
Posted by Daviid ss it make me cry everytime i read this, its so beautiful and honest love, i loved it so much the end was the hearthbraker i couldn“t keep going reading by then cuz i was crying like a baby, but i had to and i was so minigfull to me and theach me about love, and that is never imposible, i have a bery similar story, whit a guy i had this huge crash on scince the firts time i saw hime and 5 yeears! Later we where kissing on my Birthday
I LOVEED IT THANK YOU SO MUCH FOT THIS
Posted by jesus Best strory ever written!! U should change the ending thou..... make them get back together!! But I loved it anyways!! Cried and smiled through it all!!
Posted by James I love it!it made me cry 3 times. I love the ending part though its heartbreaking. I think you should write more stories, youre a good writer and i thnk you should pursue it. Xoxo.:) i?m waiting for your nxt story.
Posted by Adan Love the story
Posted by jonathan tiller what was ure fuck like i was in a group sex before and when i was in 10th grade i fucked 3 dudes in the locker room AND A BUNCH OF WHITE CUM CAME RIGHT ON TOP OF ME find me on face book
Posted by jeremy How fucking sad. I'm in TEARS!!
Posted by Dale Michael, this is such a powerful and wonderful story. I just about started balling my eyes out at the end. You are an exellent writer. This is such a marvolus story. I love your writing!!!XD. I'm also 15 almost 16.
Posted by akash i cant write much coz m cryin
truly u r awesm in writing skills!!!!! u really made me to picturise d thngs!!!!!!!!!! ihope i cud get sm1 like D. .. ..
Posted by Str8 guy hey, wow, really amazing story, short though. Would really recommend the story and details to be lengthened. I love this story. I'm straight, but might see guys in a different way after reading this. Really expecting to read more.
Posted by annon It story was beautiful! Yet it made me cry :(. The emotion you expressed through your writing is amazing! You have a real talent, keep up the good work.
Posted by David i think u should have been a wrighter. your book has reached my hart. its such a sad ending tho. WHY DIDENT YOU GET BACK TOGETHER WITH HIM AN GET MARRIED!!! He realy loved you! I would think he probley comited suicide by now... :( if i were him an he had to go to collage an u dident wait for me when u said u loved him an he said he loved you. i would comit suiside. i am sry but you realy messed up!!!
Posted by Mike Dude this story is fricking awesome!! When I read it I totally convince that this is a real story even u stayed earlier it's totally fantasy. I love to ask u to write the sequel of this story n love to know u even more.. Nice story and good job
Posted by jacob Oh my gosh. Seriously? Worst plot line ever. First off, please note the difference between where were and we're, there their and they're and other words like that.
Now back to the plot....so some freshmen manages to catch the eye of some super hot sophmore? His friend doesn't bother explaining why he was mad and just left? And the older guy says he isn't gay, but just has a lot of Passion for the younger guy? And then everyone believes that and accepts them?!?! Where the hell is this high-school because I would move there I'm a second if I knew of such an open minded school. The parents are totally normal with it, and they even let the boys sleep over when they know they are gay, and dating? Seriously what the fuck? I'm sure you can do better.
Posted by Yuki Mendez uuugghhhhhh hu hu hu hu i can't stop myself from crying it's just so sad uuhhhhh hu hu hu hu really i can't just stop you both love each other but you both have to separate like that*sniff* but i wish you all the best i hope that you both will meet and love each other again good luck ~^.^~ thanks for sharing your story
Posted by Random boy This story is so beautiful i just wanna cry my eyes out
I'm 13 (no im no perv) i just know i am gay becouse i like ą cute boy:)
And i just wanted 2 read ą coming out story when this pop upped
And i red it and now i know theres Nothing wrong with me
Hopefully continue it and thx Sry for grammer i aint english
Posted by Random boy This story is so beautiful i just wanna cry my eyes out
I'm 13 (no im no perv) i just know i am gay becouse i like ą cute boy:)
And i just wanted 2 read ą coming out story when this pop upped
And i red it and now i know theres Nothing wrong with me
Hopefully continue it and thx Sry for grammer i aint english
Posted by bruno thats such a sad story but full of love
Posted by Skylar Potvin This is the only story I can say has ever made me cry my eyes out. You may be one of the best authors I've read on here!!! :')
Posted by tampa22 nice story and setting. I like it. love the whole thing from beginning to end. loved the way it ended. hope you can come up with a second part to it. :)
Posted by Dgg This happened to me last year and I haven't gotten over it...I live in Alaska and my bf moved to Maine to attend college. We broke up but after reading this story, I called him and told him I am moving to Augusta with him. I hope that gives u guys some clear of conscience
Posted by Logan a.k.a Skylar Potvin Whenever I feel sad I read this story. Whenever I'm happy I read this story. No matter what emotion I have except for anger i read this story and it makes me cry everytime and it makes me think of my life sometimes. Mostly because I told my friend Matt I'm bi but he was fine with it and no I haven't had sex with a guy but still. I always think of me and my best friend when I read this because I love him and he said he has those feelings for me somedays. One day I hope we'll be like you guys or I hope we'll be like you and Matt. Whichever way it goes this will always be my favorite story and Matt C. You'll always be my first gay love but also my best friend 3
Posted by Nick Really touching. It made me cry.
Posted by Lisa It's a beautiful story and it made me cry.
Posted by Jace I cryed at the end of this.:')!
Posted by Omarie Omg this story is so sweet....i wish it was like this for me but as the years go by i havent found a love close to this, i know am just 19 my life is yet to start but i've been single for almost 2 years know...i really wished both you would have work out something
Posted by Omarie it would be nice if you can get donovan to do his side of the story 3... i want to know what he was thinking the first time he saw you. really hoped things would be different so both of you could still be together...but i guess the moral of the story is its better to love than to never loved at all