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The most painful yet beautiful experience with a jock! reviews

Posted by Lucas
This is the saddest hottest story ever!! 3 it's definetly my fav!!
Posted by jonathan
You made me cry, but it was good! Plz make more
Posted by Erick James
i like this story best one i have ever read...
Posted by Nohbdy
Omg!! I cried so hard!! This doesn't need to be on a site like this!!!! You need to write a book!!
Posted by joe
oh my god this is the best story i have ever read i didnt want it to end you are in my opinion the best author ever
Posted by Brian
This story is so good but it makes me want to know more, Harvard isn't that far from NYU and you should definatly continue it
Posted by nick
this is a reallly beautiful story. i love it so much
Posted by Zachary Ross
Man this was a touching storie makes me think of who I'll fall in true love with, still lovely an touching storie
Posted by Kamaki
WTF?!?!?!?
Posted by DanielHottz
Love this story so much!!!!!!!! So passionate!!!!! I have to tell you I cried please make a book!!!!!! I love your writting!
Posted by freind
hello michael.......i don't geting words to expres me........bat can we be friends..............i love to have u as my friend.......ur friend vinod...it pure..
Posted by fernando
I love this story I am bisexual and I loved it I cried so much thank you very much you have changed my life I learned to not be ashamed of my sexuality I would really like to talk to you so if you have an email adress please give it to me and I hope you are okay and I think you should date him again
Posted by Alex
this was a great story since it's actually about love not sex I found myself like Donovan so you must be happy with the memories you could have made things work and still pursued what you wanted to do, perphaps why not rekindle a relationship with him? It seems like you were genuionly in love and it could turn out to be great and also any chance of you telling us where Donovan is? I wouldnt mind getting a checkup from him when he's a doc...lol
Posted by Nohbdy
You should todally go after him after youve achived your goals! The best thing about love is it can wait. I still get teary when i think of this story. i made two of my friends read it and they cried too! more! it made me realise what true love is!
Posted by BB
that was the best story i have ever read!
Posted by Stephen
wow that was a really good story :D
Posted by Lew
Nooooooooooo!! Whyyyyyyyyyy?! Nooooooooooooooooooooo!! Oh my gooosssshhhh!! I hate the ending!! It makes me sooo sad im ballin.. GREAT STORY THOUGH!! i absolutely love it!
Posted by millosh
liked ya brainz!!! sure 4 dat u aint happy wid ur life ...cool sty dreamer ...
Posted by Brad
Can I add u on facebook?
Posted by Ryan
Omg I love this story it made me cry soo much I'm deciding if I'm straight or gay right now and I just love this story I tear up every time I think about it you have to make more please.
Posted by Zion Weathers
That was the most beautiful story i read so far. that sex scene had me ready to blow a load [lol] i wish i could find someone like Donovon!
Posted by Cptn Guy
Brilliant story-telling, just a pity it had 2 end so sad.
Posted by Baby cerafin
Donovan shouldve fight for his love to michael.. I hate tragic stories..but i love this,but still wants this to be a happy ending!
Posted by ohlan
is this real? goodness, u're great. want to read another story from u. gosh, u're like nicholas sparks
Posted by Michael
Oh my god! This is just awesome, I love your guys' feedback it's greatly appreciated 3 I'd love to share more but I can't, really, I haven't seen him, and sorry it ended sadly but thats just life. However moreover I am working on the story of our prom night because that was another passionate day for us. I hope you'll like it.
Posted by Adan
Love the story
Posted by jeremy
How fucking sad. I'm in TEARS!!
Posted by Str8 guy
hey, wow, really amazing story, short though. Would really recommend the story and details to be lengthened. I love this story. I'm straight, but might see guys in a different way after reading this. Really expecting to read more.
Posted by Mike
Dude this story is fricking awesome!! When I read it I totally convince that this is a real story even u stayed earlier it's totally fantasy. I love to ask u to write the sequel of this story n love to know u even more.. Nice story and good job
Posted by Dgg
This happened to me last year and I haven't gotten over it...I live in Alaska and my bf moved to Maine to attend college. We broke up but after reading this story, I called him and told him I am moving to Augusta with him. I hope that gives u guys some clear of conscience
Posted by Nick
Really touching. It made me cry.
Posted by Lisa
It's a beautiful story and it made me cry.
Posted by Omarie
Omg this story is so sweet....i wish it was like this for me but as the years go by i havent found a love close to this, i know am just 19 my life is yet to start but i've been single for almost 2 years know...i really wished both you would have work out something
Posted by Omarie
it would be nice if you can get donovan to do his side of the story 3... i want to know what he was thinking the first time he saw you. really hoped things would be different so both of you could still be together...but i guess the moral of the story is its better to love than to never loved at all
Posted by Pleaseeeee
You should make a second part to this where they find each kther again!!!!pleaseee pleasee pleaseee
Posted by bill
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Posted by thomas
Have you gotten in contact with donavan? That was the cuttest story ever and I started crying reading it
Posted by jv
a perfect ending story
Posted by Nobody
That was amazing! i played Secondhand Serenade - Fall For You from the car part to the end! im crying.. Thank you
Posted by Michael Andrew Compean
I loved it! Such romantic genuine love! 3
Posted by ozqueen71
It has been Painfully slow getting to part 2..and You really should get someone to CORRECT your Spelling...For an aspiring writer..You should be ashamed !!!!
Posted by muhoozibrian
i luv ur story
Posted by Justin
Perfect
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Posted by HANS CALAGUAS
I truly love this story, for reali
Posted by Brady
Good story,hope it wasn't all fiction! Lol who says being a nerd can't be fun? You're not from southern Indiana are you??
Posted by Harsha
This story was so beautiful, I could picture everyone in my imagination, you made me cry, laugh, jump out of joy when you guys kissed. Please keep writing more.
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