Posted by Mike So hot!! So horny!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Posted by Zerotenks Good story and everything runs smooth. One thing that really made me happy was at the end when the guy sees he does not have the ring on(i was happy for the guy). It was kind of sad for me to see him grow and get over the other guy so fast. I felt like i was there, like the love was really there between the two. It was an ok story. I liked the story but it didn't give me that "i want to read more feeling." Other than that, GOOD JOD.
Posted by Jeff MacDonald Well hang on Zerotenks. Collin's first love, Trent is by no means out of the story. But remember, what made the story so special or intresting was that Trent was a traveling salesman with his own life to lead. The two certainly couldn't fall in love given Collin is still a teen and was on vacation with his family.
Like most teens, Collin now want's to explore and have a good time like all young guys do.. I mean would you really expect a young teenager to fall in love with a older man on his first gay encounter that he met while vactioning and then settle down with him? That wouldn't be realistic. So hang on and keep reading my friend. I figure there are at least 6 or 7 chapters to the story.
Posted by Zerotenks True. I see what you are talking about. Keep on keeping on then. LOL Can't wait to read more.
Posted by Calvin Really awesome story - I'd love to have sex as hot as that!!
Posted by Ken I really do like your writing. Great chapter.
Posted by Jeff Thanks Ken...I really do enjoy getting feedback from everyone.
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