Posted by TW Good job in general, however you switch in the middle of the story to using a different person perspective. That's the only thing I'd have fixed before putting it on. Otherwise very good.
Posted by bad story dont like the story... and you mention Boston first... then you are in Utah.. if he is on a business trip in Boston, and you meet at a ski lodge, how did you go to Utah
Posted by albsexy HOT HOT MMMMM very sexy
“I’m ready for my next lesson. How do we fuck next? That was good but can I fuck you as I fuck my chicks, with your legs on my shoulders? I want to watch your face as I fuck you.” Ray said as I lay on my back and directed him between my legs...