Posted by Kevin this is a great story sorry i didn't leave a review for your first story i liked this very much i think they should wait off until telling willies sister and have her get a divorce from him because he is always working and never at home, then like 2 months after the divorce you should have willy come out to his family and then announce that he is engaged to tommy
Posted by J. Please continue...they have not actually had much of a physical realtionship you could certainly expand on that! If you do, could you include some more details about each of them physically. You could start by them moving in together. Good luck
Posted by john keep writing!!!...make them move in then fuck tommy! :D
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Posted by wow500 Fabulous. fabulous, but take your time no one will rush you (provided your consistant)
As far a suggestions go, alow more of an antagonist-Have willy be remorceful about his sisters failing relationship. or introduce another male into the picture, someone to temp Willy. Have tommy explain his emotions, and how and why he feels that way.But most importantly have the series continue because I'm in love with this story.
Posted by Romeo God I hope you don't continue this story! I think they deserve each other because nothing goes better with an homo abuser than an homo home wrecker who destroys his own family.
He beat him once, he'll beat him again.
I hope they rot in HELL!
I think it's sick to try to make this sick shit look like a love story!
Posted by óô Romeo,Chill out. Good story. Please continue
Posted by kingloa gilder I thought that this was more informing and a whole hell of a lot better than the last
Posted by Nick Dnt gve a damn abt wat pepl has to say bad abt u. Lik u wrote renee deserves beter, nd it wnt b rit 4 tommy nd wily if tonmy continued hs mariage wit renee.
Nd ya u cn mke wily tke revnge on hm 4 wat tommy did to hm..
Nd latr realise dat he s truly, deeply nd madly in lov wit tommy. U knw dat kinda shit..