Posted by Brad Smith Wow! That was simply incredible. One of the best stories I've read! PLEASE keep writing!
Posted by Ken That was an incredible story. I hope there is more to this one. Well written.
Posted by lee1746 thkis sounds like the beginning to a good story,
Jacob and will could have some great times togather
I giv this story a 2 thumbs up
Posted by lee1746 this sounds like the beginning to a good story,
Jacob and will could have some great times togather
I give this story a 2 thumbs up
Posted by dwc Definitely one of my favorites!!!! Totally awesome!!! Keep writing!
Posted by nate excellent story. shame the sex part was a little rushed and not as romantic as i like but i think the plot is good.
hope there will be another chapter to this. maybe then you could write a romantic love scene..just for me. lol
Posted by me this is great. good storyline.
Posted by Terkish Very nice story....keep it up sir!
Posted by JD This was really nice. I hope there's more.
Posted by FallenAngel223 I loved the story!
“Hey, man. That was a nice thing you did for me in there. I needed to have my cock sucked. I want to deposit more of my sperm in your cock sucking mouth. So how about you and me getting together later this afternoon and have another go at it. I know you want it and I want to give it to you...