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Posted by Chad
ahhhh!!! i check the site everyday for this part and now it's here!!!!
lol. great story man...it's priceless. i like every part of it. i think i read every sentence like 3 times because i dont wanna miss anything. lmao.
WRITE FASTER!! PLEASE!!!
Posted by Mophead
So I say this every fucking time, but I think THIS was your best part yet. No seriously...this shit is amazing Billy. The whole drama between Jacob and Will is so touching and well written. And Alex and David was hot, but it actually meant something. And that whole part with Billy coming back!? Holy shit!
Posted by Nate
Excellent work.
Posted by Ken
Absolutely outstanding story. This is my favorite story on this site. I especially liked the revenge on the coach. Great writing. Can't wait for more.
Thanks
Posted by jordan
hey billy i love ur series and stories a lot. ive really gotten hooked on them. keep up the good work
Posted by Russ
Billy,
This was by far the best that I've read, there was still a lot of what I keep coming back for, and then some. You're very talented at writing this series, and can hardly contain myself for what's to cum. lol.
a 10 for sure.
Posted by R.C
omg i love this chapter
it was so touching
i love your work
i can't wait to read more of it
Posted by kevin
great story
but you've kept us waiting for so long
Posted by Brad
you're making me all hard over here reading these stories, i cant wait till you give us the next chapter
Posted by Chad
hey are you still writing the continuation to this story?
Posted by Hugh
WoW!!! glad to see that awful coach got done over - what a repulsive character...lol! Hot as.. Keep 'em coming!
Posted by Dave
How much longer till the next part, i am dying to know what happens next, the parts about will and jacob are my favorites. This story could seriously be turned into a movie or at least a book, if u dial the sex back just a little bit so it could actually be shown!
Posted by Mr.exclusive
Omg I fucking loved it. I have to have more.
Posted by Jay
I love the stories hurry on the next chapter cant wait
Posted by Jake
Love the story hury on the next part
Posted by Justin
Hurry on the next ch im dieing to read it i love the story u shuld wright a book keap it coming and pleas hurry
Posted by henry
Wow i so love ur stories Billy, their immense sexual tensions amongest the characters really turn me on.. i hope you can write more and never stop cause i would so get pissed if u stopped writing! your stories give me fantasies that cant be done.. whew.. great.. stories hope you will update soon... your the only writer that i read online, the other ones are crap compared to yours!~ i give you a perfect 10 on the stories, keep up with the stories, soon you get many fans~
Posted by jerry
i really like your stories!!!! they are awesome! i especially love the relationship of will and jacob. if you ever write a book or gets printed or have a love story this good please tell me! =) i am now an oficial fan of this story... hope that their love never ends! thanx so much for it!!!!!
Posted by Han
keep writing!
This story has to be my favorite on the site
i read it all the time
cant wait for more!
Posted by willy
okk ive laughed smiled and cried you have a telent my friend and i am begging you to make another one well good luck and please please please make another one and e-mail if you do :)
Posted by mark
oh god you need to da another part..
i loved this
please i'm beggin you :)
Posted by Patrick
wonderful story and seems so true... good job keep it up
Posted by Adam
Wow! Please, please, please hurry and post the next installment. I have become so emotionally invested into Will and Jacobs relationship and I can't wait to read what happens next. You have mananged to write a story on this site where I'd rather read about the emotional dynamics of the characters that I skip over the sex scenes to find out what happens!!
Posted by mandy
omg i love this story whenu put more up ypu have to email me and tell me i.am.in.control@hotmail.com
Posted by John A. Marks
OMG this is one of the best fucking stories ive reead on this site, keep up the great work dude!!!!
Posted by Joshua
No that cant be the end! so sad!
Posted by george
hey wondering if your going to upload any more soon
please so you are
Posted by Romeo
I like your series!
I really like to know more about David, Alex, Danny, Chris, and the others. I can do without Jacob, Will, and Kate. I really got tired of Will and Jacob after the second chapter, just wasn't exciting to me! Their shit is normal, nothing I haven't read before. Kate, that bitch needs to get a life!
What will happen with David and Alex. Will they go their seperate ways or stay together? Did Danny and Chris ever went out? Did they become a couple? They look like the beginning of a good couple like David and Alex. I think you can do a spin off series with David and Alex plus Danny and Chris or with all four guys. Just drop Will, Jacob, and Kate.
Don't even think about making Will and Jacob the "king and queen, king and king, or queen and queen" of the prom. Neither of them can be valadictorian because David have better grades than all of them.
Keep writing, can't wait for the next chapter unless you focus to much on Jacob and Will. Than I can wait!
Posted by CD
Romeo.....the world doesnt revolve around u
Billy.....Great job keep going just the way u r
Posted by Jonathon
Amazing.
This has made me smile, laugh, and especailly cry.
Honestly, I came to this site to read about sex, but this story makes me want to know about them. Not the sex, but the love.
I actually just skip over the sex parts.
Will and Jacob has the best part in this series.
You should consider publishing.
Posted by Cherrie
All of these stories are fantastic! I love your writing. I can't wait to read the next instillment. I'm dyin to know what happens next for Jacob & Will, as well as the Alex and his student.
Posted by kevin
its been 3 years and some change. i need this story to be wrapped. its amazing
Posted by Kevin
Do you have the rest of the story up on another storyline perhaps?
Posted by Taylor
Wow! What a great series :) finally the two characters get to have a proper relationship without the secrecy. Please write faster, can't wait for nine
Posted by Will
Hey I just finished reading and I just wanted to say I think it's AMAZING!!!! I love the settings, the characters and their problems and their relationships and of course the sex, please please please write more. It would be very appreceated. :D
Posted by Ahmed Zabedy
YOU JUS WROTE THE BEST EVER STORY CUZ THE LOVE SITUATION IS BEST OV HERE N I LOVED THE WAY U MIXED SOME MORE LOVE PAIRS IN THIS I JUS LOVD IT ALOT BUT CAN U JUST END THE STORY BY MAKING EVERY LOVEBIRDS' A HAPPY ENDING....... I m wishing u ll do that... BTW HAPPY AND LOVE NEW YEAR 2012....
Love Zabb.....
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