Too Perfect to Be true. Part 8 reviews

So I say this every fucking time, but I think THIS was your best part yet. No seriously...this shit is amazing Billy. The whole drama between Jacob and Will is so touching and well written. And Alex and David was hot, but it actually meant something. And that whole part with Billy coming back!? Holy shit!

hey billy i love ur series and stories a lot. ive really gotten hooked on them. keep up the good work

you're making me all hard over here reading these stories, i cant wait till you give us the next chapter

hey are you still writing the continuation to this story?

WoW!!! glad to see that awful coach got done over - what a repulsive character...lol! Hot as.. Keep 'em coming!

How much longer till the next part, i am dying to know what happens next, the parts about will and jacob are my favorites. This story could seriously be turned into a movie or at least a book, if u dial the sex back just a little bit so it could actually be shown!

Hurry on the next ch im dieing to read it i love the story u shuld wright a book keap it coming and pleas hurry

wonderful story and seems so true... good job keep it up

No that cant be the end! so sad!

its been 3 years and some change. i need this story to be wrapped. its amazing

Do you have the rest of the story up on another storyline perhaps?

Hey I just finished reading and I just wanted to say I think it's AMAZING!!!! I love the settings, the characters and their problems and their relationships and of course the sex, please please please write more. It would be very appreceated. :D

omg !!! love it can't wait for the next part haha keep it up b^.^b

Great story man.good job keep it coming