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Too Perfect to be true. Part 5 reviews

Posted by mophead
Yes...This was fucking awesome. Well done Billy. Your stories continue to amaze me.
Posted by jake
Dude i so love your storyes..they are the best so far, and they keep getting better.
Posted by Eyeballer
that was by far the sexiest and best one yet. The locker room gang bang was fuckin awesome! Story's great! keep it comin
Posted by Ken
This is a extremely hot part. You really had me going. I really do hope you have more for us. I've got to hand it to you, this is really good. Hope there is more soon.
Posted by PHATBOY
dude u like so know how to leave you wanting so much moore like wow PS i love the fackt that daved is a prime chericter hes such a reminder of me
Posted by mophead
Read it again...Just so fucking good man.
Posted by Brad
u really need to write the rest of it, its such a hot story, when i read the first one i couldn't stop, ended up staying up half the night reading all 5 parts!
Posted by Hugh
Wow! That locker-room orgy was totally unrealistic but I soon forgot that - man it was hoooottt!! I've read the first 5 parts now and to think there are three more of these hot things to go! Wow!
Posted by Andrew
this story needs another part!
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