Posted by mophead Yes...This was fucking awesome. Well done Billy. Your stories continue to amaze me.
Posted by Cod As they say the title says it all! Very good story with the right amount of sex and romance! Very nice indeed! I’m anxious to see how this will evolve! Keep up the good work and happy holidays!
Posted by jake Dude i so love your storyes..they are the best so far, and they keep getting better.
Posted by Eyeballer that was by far the sexiest and best one yet. The locker room gang bang was fuckin awesome! Story's great! keep it comin
Posted by Ken This is a extremely hot part. You really had me going. I really do hope you have more for us. I've got to hand it to you, this is really good. Hope there is more soon.
Posted by PHATBOY dude u like so know how to leave you wanting so much moore like wow PS i love the fackt that daved is a prime chericter hes such a reminder of me
Posted by Russ Holy shit, this was so fuckin' hot. Definitely one of the best, and the ending? shit, can't wait for the next installment. Billy, you've got one hell of an imagination, Kudos to you man. Keep 'em cumming, and I'll keep cumming back.
Posted by mophead Read it again...Just so fucking good man.
Posted by Nate Great story, sir. I don't check the site very often... got bored, opened up your profile and have read through them all- fantastic. Hope you keep it going. There are several amazing authors here, but most of them seem to have stopped writing. Oh well. I hope you'll be one of the ones who keep going. G'luck, and I look forward to reading the rest of this later! Drop me a line if you feel like it, I wouldn't mind beta reading this for you, not one bit. :)
Posted by jordan damn ur stories rock out loud. i got so hooked on ur first and sencond stories, i just had to keep reading em. i think that Will and Jacob are great characters as well as David and Mr. Erikson. i love readin ur stories! All of them have great depth. i cant wait till ur next parts in the series! I hope u bring more and more to cum in the future! (ps ~ ive read alot of stories on this website, and most of them get really boring, but this are just so much better!)
Posted by Brad u really need to write the rest of it, its such a hot story, when i read the first one i couldn't stop, ended up staying up half the night reading all 5 parts!
Posted by Hugh Wow! That locker-room orgy was totally unrealistic but I soon forgot that - man it was hoooottt!! I've read the first 5 parts now and to think there are three more of these hot things to go! Wow!
Posted by Andrew this story needs another part!