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Posted by Mike
Has the potential to be a good story - but lacking on the detail front. To be a really good story we need to know more about the characters so that we can empathise with them and their situation. Graphic descriptions of sex are not enough to make a great story.
Posted by Rob
Thank you for your comment, I did try to rewrite some of it after it was posted but the site wouldn't let me. Just to let you know that the stories are actually based on fact and more about the personalities of the characters were to come in future installments.
Posted by Romeo
You must not be getting together because your stories are way to short.
Posted by Romeo
You need to make the stories more longer. Maybe a description of the characters, backround, and/or surroundings can help. You really need more details of the stories, maybe more details of the sexual events.
I hope you find that special place for the 2 of you! Maybe that special spot can be your writing spot also. Maybe it can put you more into your writing and make it better.
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