Posted by JD Not quite the direction I thought this story was going to go in but ok. I'm looking forward to the next one.
Posted by mophead Hey there has got to be conflict. I liked it a lot. I love this relationship. The classroom scene was hot although I can't wait for Will and Jacob to get back together. They're so sweet. But I'm glad that there is more developement and not everything actually is perfect. It's great. I really relate to both characters.
Posted by Joseph Stephens Hey there, Seems like you might need a Beta Reader. Just email me if you do. I check it everyday, and always reply. Incase you don't know what exactly a Beta Reader is... It's a person who proof reads your stories before hand, and checks them for grammatical errors. I don't know if my email will show up or not but here it is: downunderthe_dark@hotmail.com I'll be looking foward to your reply!
Posted by ambassador Very nice
Posted by paul r misiura more more more i like these guys ther so fucking screwd up but thats why i like them
Posted by Lee1746 Will what's going to happin with will & Jacob Will thay get back to gather? would be nice
Posted by Ken Boy I really did not see that coming. What a surprise and what a story. This has got to be one of the best sotries on this site.