Too perfect to be true.

(Part 1 from 1. Fiction.)

Will watched the crowed of students rush into the front doors of the school. “One more year.” He thought to himself. “I can do this.”
After spending the summer in LA living independently and trying to score modeling and acting jobs with much older peers and friends, he wasn’t thrilled with returning to high school. He felt like he had finally found himself and the idea of having to return to the halls of such a superficial and ignorant place frightened him.

“I hate high school kids, Kate.” He had told his best friend on the phone the night before. “They’re so oblivious to what’s actually out there. I have so many fake friends. I have to put on a completely different façade at high school.”

“Well then, why don’t you just come out?” Kate asked. Kate had been Will’s best friend since 3rd grade.

“This is Wisconsin Kate, that wouldn’t go over real well. And besides, I don’t want to be known as ‘Gay Will’. I hate labels, and that’s what high school is all about.”

“Yeah, I guess.” She said disappointed.

“I was so happy in LA, Kate. I had guys gushing over me and it was good! It was totally okay…I have never felt better about myself.” Will said.

Will was only open to a few people at the school: closest friends and a few people who had unfortunately found out through rumors of hookups. Will was by no means completely innocent. He had had his fair share of hookups and lost his virginity to an actor in LA who was seven years older than him the past summer. But Will wanted something more. He was a complete romantic and doubted he would ever find any romance in high school.

And now he stood before the doors of his mid-western high school, watching the new group of freshman cower under the upper-classmen’s shadows. He had already heard people call each other “fag” twice since he began approaching the building. Culture shock was a very poor way to describe what he was feeling. Will was by no means “unpopular” at his school. Everyone liked him. There was no reason not to. He was incredibly nice, talented, friendly, and good looking. His facial features were striking but he was by no means “well built”, he was just thin and satisfied with his body, he just never found “pumping iron” very enjoyable. Girls still wooed over him though. He dressed extremely well and was very clean cut. He sang and acted. If you examined stereotypes, you may have thought Will was gay…but for the most part he acted straight.

Will stopped at his locker and threw his car keys and sunglasses into the metal cubby. As he turned a rush of bright blue football jerseys flew by him. He got a few nods from some of the players as if to say, “what’s up man?” Will knew many of the players on the team and was friends with all of them. While he didn’t play sports, Will was the “nice guy” in class and even the football players took note of that. As the players passed Will’s eyes fell on someone he had tried hard to forget about the past summer. Jacob O’Hare.

Jacob O’Hare was perfect, undeniably so. He had a perfect body with a perfect face and perfect bone structure. Jacob’s face incredibly handsome and beautiful and still incredibly unique and striking. He was a junior but looked as if he were a junior in college. He looked much older than any of his senior teammates. Not only did Jacob have the looks and the tan, but also he had the perfect personality to match. He was genuine and would never hurt a fly. He was the school’s star quarterback AND the school's star artist. No one had ever-frustrated Will more than Jacob. He simply couldn’t believe that people like this actually existed. He was as envious of Jacob as he was completely in love with him. As Jacob passed, Will struggled not to stare. He didn’t like the idea that he was attracted to someone like this. He usually went for the less-conventional types. But he couldn’t help himself. When Jacob walked by it was as though his favorite movie star had just passed him in LA. Jacob noticed and smiled mildly as he walked by. Embarrassed and even more frustrated, Will struggled to stay on his feet, feeling his face turn a dark red.

“You’re pathetic.” Said Kate appearing out of nowhere. She had seen the entire scene and known of Will’s feelings for Jacob since Will himself had felt them. “You really think no one will find your drooling obvious?” She laughed.

“Fuck you.” Will said with humor pulling out his schedule. He leaned in and gave Kate a kiss on the cheek.

“Oh that’s how you cover it up!” She joked.

“I’ve said hello that way since we were 12.” He opened his schedule and she opened hers. “Two classes together. Perfect.” He said.

“Yeah but its not me you really want in your class.” She laughed. “Say hi to Jakey for me.” She said quietly before skipping off to her first period.

Of course she was right. And as the day went on, Will found himself incredibly disappointed to find that Jacob was not, in fact, in any of his classes; Or at least not initially.

It was during his sixth period nearly a week later that Jacob appeared in the doorway of his Statistics class.

“Hey I transferred in here. I was in Ms. Alexander’s class but she had too many students.” He said to the teacher. Will’s heart raced.

“Oh right, uh, sit down, you have this book?” The teacher asked pointing to his textbook.

“Yeah.” Said Jacob, slapping the hand of a fellow teammate and sitting at the empty seat two seats up and diagonal from Will. Will stared at the back of Jacob’s head, noticing how his hair had a perfect wave to it. He realized that passing statistics may not be as easy as he had hoped.
A couple weeks later an assignment was handed out that asked for two people to be partnered up. Will and Jacob were partners.

"He has no idea how much this is driving me crazy." Will thought to himself. "It's just some stupid partner excerise for him. Why can't it be that way for me."

"Hey man you have paper?" Jacob asked will.

"Yeah...yeah right here." Will said handing Jacob a fresh piece of binder paper. There was a doodle in the top corner of it that Will didn't notice.

"Hey man that's really cool." Jacob said pointing to the small doodle of a dog Will had drawn.

"Wha...Oh...god sorry. No it's lame." Will said.

"Nah I like it man." Jacob laughed.

"Here." Will pulled out another sheet. "Take this one instead." He handed the fresh page to Jacob.

"That's alright." Jacob smiled cooly. "I'll keep this one."

"Ummm...are you sure?" Will blushed.

"Ofcourse." Jacob said assuringly. "Now what's this stupid assignment anyway?"

The semester went on and the second semester began as well. It wasn’t long until Will began to count the days to Spring Break. He didn’t know what to think of Jacob. He wanted so badly to say, “he’s a brilliant artist! He must be gay!” but that would be a nasty stereotype and could easily be countered with the fact that Jacob was the star quarterback of the high school football team.

“He smiles at me a lot in class.” He told Kate at lunch one day.

“God you’re obsessive! Will, he’s straight…he has a girlfriend, and lot’s of people smile at you, you make jokes all through class. You’re the charming jokester.” Kate said.

“Yeah but I heard he hasn’t had sex with his girl friend! And, you should see the way he smiles. It’s different. Trust me.”

“Do you ever smile back?” Kate asked.

“No…god I can’t. As soon as he smiles I look away. I would pass out if I kept looking.”

“Well, I think the fact that you think about this so much is kind of sad. You need to let it go. Will, I thought you were over stupid high school stuff like this anyway.”

“You don’t understand Kate. This isn’t just some crush. I can’t even think when I look at him, or hear him talk, or see him talking to other people. He’s so brilliant. He gives me a feeling I can’t even describe…I didn’t even know a feeling like this existed.” Will said, as sincere as ever.

“Alright Romeo, go get some air. I gotta get to the library.” Kate said grabbing her lunch bag. She turned and put her hand on his wrist. “You really like him don’t you?” She asked.

“Yeah I do.” Will said.

“Well, you can’t let it get to you. I don’t want you to have so much false hope. You’ll fall for so many more guys after Jacob…gay ones…the good kind.” She smiled at Will and walked off.

Will lost his car keys constantly. It was almost an everyday thing for him. He would play with them in class and then spend his last period going back to each classroom looking for them. It was on the day before spring break that he was never happier that this occurred. He checked his science class and had no luck so he decided to head out to the portables across campus where he had his history class. It was a long walk and he was dreading the fact that he had to do it. When he reached the other side he saw a group of the jocks standing by his history classroom. They separated and only one of them was left standing there. It was Jacob. He was leaning against the wall as if he was waiting for someone. Will felt his knees go completely weak. He tried to swallow but the lump in his throat was unbearable. He decided not to look at Jacob and simply walk by.

“What, no hello?” He heard suddenly. It couldn’t have been Jacob. Sure they talked but were they really on greeting terms? Will turned. Sure enough Jacob stood there smiling waiting for an answer with his eyebrows raised.

“Uh…Oh god sorry, Hi!” Will yelped. He cringed at himself. Trying hard not to loose it.

“What are you doing here still?” Jacob asked.

“I, ha, I lost my keys…my car keys…for driving…my car.” Will wanted to crawl into a hole and never leave.

“Shit man! I hope you find them. I gotta talk to my teacher, just waiting for her to show up.”

“Cool.” Will said…allowing an awkward silence between the two of them.

Jacob laughed, “Go find your keys.”

“Right.” Will said and turned quickly.
Will practically ran into the classroom. His teacher smiled at him “Keys?” he asked. Will nodded and looked around his desk. There was nothing. He didn’t want to have to walk back outside again if Jacob was still there. What would he say this time? More importantly, how stupidly would he behave? However, he decided to brave it and opened the door back outside. Jacob was still standing there but this time he was talking to his teacher. He intimidated everyone. The look on the teachers face was that of immense envy as he struggled to focus on discussing Jacobs grade. Will smiled and tried to slink by. Jacob stopped him.

“Hold on.” He said to his teacher, “Hey Will.” Jacob yelled after him. Will took in an uncontrollable gasp with his back turned to Jacob. He shuttered hearing his name called out by him. “Did you find your keys?” Jacob asked.

“Na, But I’ll be fine.” Will said, barely turning.

“I’ll give you a ride home.” Jacob told him. Will’s heart sank.

“What?” Will asked.


Jacob turned to his teacher. “I’ll give you the paper tomorrow, I swear.” The teacher smiled and said okay. Jacob turned back to Will and laughed. “That paper’s a week late…that guys such a push-over.”

“Right, yeah, um I really don’t need a ride.” Will said.

Laughing, Jacob said, “What’s the matter with you man, you afraid of me or something. C’mon it’s not a big deal at all. You don’t have a car to drive home.”

“I’m not afraid of you!” Will yelped.

Jacob gave a confused pause. “Well…good.” He smiled and began to lead Will to the parking lot. Will passed Kate on the way, who simply stared and tilted her head like a confused dog. Will shrugged to her when Jacob wasn’t looking.
Even Jacob’s car was perfect. It was a black re-painted, re-modeled old ford truck.

“Nice car.” Will said to Jacob sitting in the passenger seat. He felt numb. Everything was happening so fast.

“Thanks. My dad and I fixed it up.” Jacob said.

Will laughed, “Of course.” He said.

Jacob looked confused, “What’s that supposed to mean?”

“Nothing…I just…I mean you do everything…you’re like, Mr. Perfect or something.” Will couldn’t believe what he was saying.

“Rrrright.” Jacob responded turning the ignition. “Um, yeah I really don’t get that. I mean I don’t try to be.”

It was quiet for a moment as they pulled out of the parking lot. Will’s legs were shaking. He had just pissed off the one person he could barely even look at.

“But you are.” Will said. “I mean you do like everything! And perfectly too!” Will’s frustration was coming out in the tone of his voice.

“Well sorry it offends you so much.” Jacob frowned.

“No, No I didn’t mean it that…” Will started.

Jacob cut him off “Where do you live?” He asked sharply.

“96 Jackson street.” Will said quietly.
It was silent again. Will wanted to scream. Then Jacob broke back in.

“Who are you to call me Mr. Perfect man? I mean I watch you all the time. You’ve got everything. You are the star of the school shows, you have this unbelievable voice and every fucking person in this school knows you and you make people laugh hysterically all class like you own them or something.” Jacob said.

“I own them? What? You’re the star of our school! You’re Mr. Friendly! You’re Mr. Gorgeous, Mr. I can have any-girl-I-want!” Will yelled.

“I can’t talk to people like you. I don’t know how to approach people…You make friends with who ever you feel like talking to…except me.” Jacob paused “Mr. Gorgeous?”

“Never mind,” Will said quickly. “Yeah, well if you have so much trouble approaching people what’s this I’ll give you a ride Thing?”

“I dunno man I needed to talk to you!” Jacob said.

“Why?” Will asked.

“Cuase I look up to you.”

“You look up to me?” Will was shocked.

“Of course I do! Everyone does. I wanted to know why you treat me like shit so much! I mean you are everyone else’s best friend but you won’t even give me the time of day, man. Every time I try to just look at you, you turn away. Did I do something to offend you?” Jacob asked.

“Oh god.” Will said closing his eyes.

“What!?” Jacob asked frustrated, “Seriously what now!? I mean I have tried so hard to be nice to you.”

“No no, this is all wrong and bad.” Will rambled. “I shouldn’t be in this situation.”

“Jesus Christ, do you hate me that much!?” Snapped Jacob.

“NO!” Will yelled. The car fell dead silent. “Of course I don’t fucking hate you! Jesus, how the hell could I hate you!? You’re fucking perfect. You’re everything anyone could ever want. You’re the most beautiful person I’ve met. You are a fucking god to me man I can’t even look at you.” Will stopped. He didn’t want to say that. He wanted to jump out of the moving car. Perhaps Jacob was making it easier for him because the car jerked to the side of the road and stopped. Will didn’t move. There was a painful silence. Will looked quickly at Jacob who had his hand on his forehead. He looked like he was going to be sick…or cry.

“I hope this isn’t the worst mistake I ever make in my life.” Jacob said suddenly.

“What?” Will asked quietly.

Jacob took a huge breath. Before Will even knew it, Jacobs’s lips were on his. A bolt of electricity and heat shot through to Will’s feet. Jacob pushed hard and then pulled back as though something had scared him. He stared at Will, who sat there with a blank look on his face until the emotion rose from his stomach into his head and he whispered “you have no idea how much I love you.” The two sat there in silence staring at each other until Jacob started to laugh. He smiled widely and then pulled Will into his body from across the seats. They kissed violently, as if they would never be able to kiss again. Every kiss, Will felt a thousand bolts rushing through his body. The two moaned over each other. Will started to laugh at the same time as Jacob started to kiss his neck.

“You’re the most beautiful guy I know.” Jacob whispered to Will.

“I can’t…how are you saying that to me?” Will said in disbelief as he felt Jacobs chest against his own.

“We need to get out of this car.” Jacob said. He continued to kiss, afraid to pull away but finally did. He jumped out of his driver seat pulled down his shirt and up his tight jeans. He ran around the car and opened the door for Will. Will watched his perfectly formed body through his tight white tee, makes its way over to his door. Will climbed out and they looked at each other standing together on the side of the road. Jacob grabbed a blanket from under the passenger seat and grabbed Will’s hand. “C’mon.” He said.

The two wandered into the woods next to the side of the road. They walked for a bit until they found a spot under a canopy of trees. Jacob put down the blanket and immediately pulled Will into him again. They fell onto the ground together and began to explore each other more fully. Jacob pushed himself onto will, pressing his pelvis deeply into Will’s body. Will was in complete ecstasy feeling the weight and heat of Jacob’s hard body on top of him. Jacob took off his shirt and Will gasped. His body was perfect; Lean, tan, and beautifully toned. He rolled Will on top of him and Will took off his shirt as well, blushing. Jacob smiled “You’re so cute.” He said and pulled Will in for a kiss. Will moved down to his neck and chest, circling his nipples with his tongue. “Oh my god.” Jacob moaned. He began to approach Jacob’s navel and Jacob shuddered. Will felt Jacob’s hard-on through his jeans against his neck. He knew he was in for a surprise. He began to unbutton. Jacob’s cock was stiff inside his tight white boxer briefs. His body shook as Will pulled them off over his perfect bubble butt. Jacob’s 9-inch cock flew upward and Will beamed. He grabbed the huge tool and slowly began to swirl his tongue around the large glowing head. With a sudden move, Will thrust his mouth onto the dick and took all 9 inches into his throat. Jacob screamed with ecstasy.

“Oh fuck!” he yelled. “Fuuuck.”

Will continued to suck off Jacob. He rode his mouth up the side of his cock and sucked on just the head. This drove Jacob mad. He moaned, screamed and tried not to kick under the immense pleasure. He gripped the blanket beneath him as will put his fingers into his ass crack and felt the sweat from his scrotum.Will kept sucking and exploring every part of Jacob’s handsome and beautiful dick. Suddenly Jacob pulled him up and went back to kissing him. He flipped Will over and grabbed the belt buckle on Will’s pants. In an instant Will jeans were off revealing an incredibly tight package and a huge spot of pre-cum in his crisp white underwear. Jacob began to mouth Will’s cock through the fabric of the underwear. Willed moaned as the heat of Jacob’s breath hit his dick. Jacob finally pulled off the underwear. He engulfed Will’s 8-inch tool into his mouth. Will had never had a better blow job. Jacob sucked and blew and licked and took in all eight inches. He did it all with a rhythm and flow that was irresistible. He had such an ease to it and hit every right spot. Jacob leaned back up to kiss Will. Will felt Jacobs stubble brush against his neck. He grabbed Will’s ass and squeezed it. Suddenly Jacob flipped Will over. Will loved how strong Jacob was and how powerful his body was. Soon Jacob was licking his back. Jacob shuttered over Will’s intoxicating smell.

“I gotta lick your ass man.” He said, and immediately dove in. Will threw his head back in pleasure. His body shook. The warmth of Jacob’s tongue was now inside his ass. Jacob plowed him with his tongue. He didn’t know a rim job could feel this way. Jacob swirled his tongue around and blew on Will’s hole taking in the sweet taste of Will’s sweat. He stopped abruptly.

“No.” Will said, disappointed Jacob had stopped.

“I need air man.” Jacob laughed.

“Then fuck me.” Will said breathlessly.

“What?” Jacob asked. “Are you sure?”

“Yeah, it’s okay.” Said Will, standing. He bent over and put his hand against a tree. His cheeks were spread and his hole was ready. Jacob stared at the unbelievable sight. He moved closer feeling Will’s ass cheek’s with his hands. He was scared but wanted it so bad. His cock was aching painfully for it. He held his cock to Will’s hot hole, overwhelmed. He placed his gorgeous cock onto Will’s hole and began to rub his head around it. Slowly, he shoved his huge cock into the tight anus. Will screamed.

“Fuck! Thrust all of it in!” He yelled

“I don’t want to hurt you.” Said Jacob, scared.

“Do it!” Will yelled.
Jacob thrust his body as hard and fast as he could into Will’s ass. Will screamed so loud birds scattered above.

“Oh FUCK!” Will sighed.

“Oh…Oh my god.” Said Jacob as his eyes rolled into the back of his head. He began to fuck Will slowly, exploring the inside of his ass.

“Harder man. You won’t hurt me. You couldn’t hurt me” Will said. He lied. It hurt like hell. But it was the best pain he had ever felt. Every thrust, Will’s body shook. Jacob was grabbing every inch of Will, trying to find a new piece of flesh to hold onto with each move.

Jacob began to fuck faster and more passionately. His giant nuts flopped hard against Will. He pulled Will up into him as he plowed his ass. He pushed harder and faster. He thrust furiously as Will turned his head and kissed him breathlessly. Jacob grabbed Will’s cock and began to jack it off in his hands. Will had never experienced such an incredible feeling. The most beautiful man he ever knew was now inside of him, kissing him, his hard body against his. Will knew he was going to cum. It was too much. It was unstoppable.

“FUUUUuuuuuck!” Will screamed as his cum shot hard out of his dick, flying several feet. He shot three loads in a row as his body shuddered against Jacob’s. Jacob kissed his neck and rubbed the cum against Will’s chest.

“Oh Christ, that’s it man!” Jacob said about to loose it. He slowly pulled out of Will, making will moan once more. Will turned around quickly and bent underneath Jacobs huge, hairy tool. Jacobs stroked above Will’s face until he shot the largest load Will had ever seen in his life. It flew down onto Will’s face and into his mouth. Will licked the gorgeous cock for any last drops.
He fell back against the blanket. The two help clean each other off. Sighing, Jacob’s body fell hard against his. Will took Jacob in his arms and squeezed his ass again. Jacob kissed Will and looked down at him with his priceless, perfect, and unforgettable smile. “I love you too.” Jacob said. Will smiled a dazed and contented smile. It was just to perfect to be true.


"Oh and...um" Jacob started, "I..Uh..Have your car keys."

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