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Posted by duster
need to finish story
Posted by Mike
So - is this story told in the first person or the third person?? The constant changes in the narrator made an otherwise ok story a little un-readable.
Could also have been much longer with more character exploration.
Posted by Terkish
Wow...nice story.
Keep it up!
Posted by Michael B.
Seems a lot like the other story on here, "Confessions". I would advise not to be too predictable.
Posted by Drake
i would just ilke to say that this is story is very sweet and romantic and hope there is more to it. and i would also like to say hope things work out between you two
Posted by Patrick J
Yeah you needed to finish the story and not end there.. it was a little too predictable ask Mike B. said. Also, Try using the enter key between the dialogue sentences because I kept getting lost..
Just in case you dont know.. Example:
"Justin licked corey," Marcia said.
"Thats so hot," Exclaimed the Lesbian.
Posted by Greg
Good...Continue please
Posted by charlie
good story-cant wait to read the rest!
Posted by leonardo
you have to put the second part please let me know when you have.
leonardo.lutz@yahoo.com
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