Posted by john not bad. needs more fuck seans.
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Posted by Sakura Himiko it was a great storie. i found in intresting threw the cool plot and all. i just dont understand why you only got one star. that was a good 4 STAR if you ask me. email me some time. i have a killer idea for your next storie.hugs ***BYE NOW***
Posted by Allen Great!!
Posted by Carlton W. I loved the story very much.....
Posted by Seymour Cox I'M NOT WORTHY !!!!!! - Says Seymour Cox. I love the way that you structure your sentances. It makes it so easy to follow without an endless rolling list of dialog in quotes that looks more like a movie script rather then a story. I am always finding myself doing that because I can't get the thought out of my head and onto paper as well as you can. DAMN IT ALL TO HELL! - I HATE YOU! - Okay, no I don't...I didn't mean that. But damn it all to hell anyway........Damn it! Oh yeah, this story get's an A+ Seymour Cox
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This story is NOT for wanking over, its a relationship story. Its my first story so tell me what you think. Its about when A Rich farari driving hotshot meets a poor Homeless boy...