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Posted by Christian
What a beautiful, extroadinary, mindblowing story! You should definitely write more stories. :) The best thing is that it really is a story instead os just sex, sex sex and more sex. My advice is to keep on writing and don't include more sex scenes than you already have. It's absolutely perfect this way. :)
Posted by henry
Wow that was an amazing story I actually took the liberity of reading can't wait to see what you have next!!!
Posted by jesse
keep going with this one i love the story and the people plz make a part 2
Posted by Vincent
This is just too cute and too honest and too realistic. This is amazing shit and you should keep writing.
Posted by Jim
Best story ever!!
Please keep it up! :)
Posted by Jim
I think it was a nice build up. You have a series of characters with some interesting makeups. Keep it going
Posted by leo
awesome story colin. I would really want to read another part to this story. maybe read what happens with nick and john. excellent story. great job :)
Posted by Mike
It looks like a nice move in the makeing
Posted by James ッ
Absolutely brilliant. Couldn't have asked for a better story. :)
Posted by Jonathan
I liked this story very much. It would definitely be one of the best stories made this year. It reminds me of my best friend when I was 6 or 7 and then I had to go across town and I met him 10 years later...He grown bigger and yummier. This story is amazing so please create another one. :)
Posted by Jonathan
I liked this story very much. It would definitely be one of the best stories made this year. It reminds me of my best friend when I was 6 or 7 and then I had to go across town and I met him 10 years later...He grown bigger and yummier. This story is amazing so please create another one. :)
Posted by Carl
Story is great. I wonder what happens to Nick and John. Keep up the great work
Posted by james barnes
it was great would love for you to keep writing this story line loved it
Posted by victor
wow this was a very good story
i really did like it
i got into the characters pretty good and the twist made it that much more intence and interesting
good job
Posted by Drefan
That was an amazing story. Please please PLEASE write more. And may I suggest sooner or later a foursome with the two couples ;)
Posted by Denys
Keep writing, mate! You're good, very good.
Posted by Seth
What ive seen on the comments that every buddy love the story....yes it is fantastic and it have it all you are fanny in it you are dramatic you are serious and more important you are talented...However there some spots to refer to like how can colin forget his best friend and he do so much to him and the sex scene between Dave and colin was too soon i gess .., anyway it was amazing i prefer to see colin's father in the next part ....thank u alot and good job
Posted by Frank
Oh my god, what ane awesome story. I actually had a childhood friend that I was in love with. I wish him and I were together now, I am still in love with him and miss him after all these years. Thank u for writing this, keep up the great writing.
Posted by HS
This is one of the best story on this website.
Posted by A.Q
Wow your stories are amazing and creative, don't stop with your unique imaginary and you should post more stories because I am positive that we all would love and appreciate these stories, i would spend hours and days on your stories, don't stop with the fabulous work!
I really appreciate your stories and its clear you put your time and thoughts on them.
Wish I was lucky as collin, I don't have a gay love life, or sex in any way :((((
This made my day :)
Posted by jake
Realy good story line. It even made me cry.
There where a few words I would have used but all and all was realy good. !!!!!!!
Posted by liam
good story you should wright more
Posted by george
It's really good mate. keep writing like this.. you don't have to include more sex in my opinion.you can focus a bit more on the thoughts of the characters in my opinion. well done
Posted by Matt
omg...that was amazing! PLZ write more!!! lol. It really inspires me to start coming out to some of my friends and if you knew me, you'd know what a huge statement that is lol.
Posted by john
dude, that was an amazing story.
if you dont wright another one i'll do what jesse did to those guys
Posted by Eden
This was beautifully written, I loved it :)
Posted by Colin
~from the author~
Really glad to have such positive feedback, I actually hadn't checked to see if it was even posted since the beginning of july until now since it took them so long to approve it. I'm going on a long vacation in a couple days then start classes so I won't have time to do sequel for a bit, once the semester is under way I will be sure to make one though.
Posted by Roshel
THAT WAS AMAZING
Like I couldn't stop reading it.
Posted by William
OMg that was so so amazing I loved it and so want more, I love the whole relationship side of it and I think you r really great at this XD
Posted by Joe
That was bloody brilliant. Nuff' said.
Posted by Joe
That was bloody brilliant. Nuff' said.
Posted by Chris
Such a beautiful story very touching at the heart :) 3 loved it !!
Posted by Josh
Oh my goodness. Please Please Please continue this story line. It is absolutely amazing. I might have a new favorite story line if it continues.
Posted by Tyler
That story was amazing!! I truly enjoyed reading it... I just wish it was longer!!
Posted by Sam
i loved it! you should write more!
Posted by Kevin
I want to know more. What will his mom say? Will his dad possibly return????
Posted by Barry B. Benson
i luv dis story just da way it is. i luved it. it was a amazing story i tink dis 1 is my favorite one! i luved it.
Posted by Ciril
Well, I definitely liked it. I would be happy to read something else you have written. And believe me, the fact that you emphasize on the characters makes your story much more pulsating than the other sex stories.
Posted by michael
very good u neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed to write more
Posted by skyler
this made me cry
its amazing i love it
more please ur amazing at it
Posted by Anthony Horrobin
very nice cant wait `4 mre well done, love Tony x x x rednut0306@hotmail.co.uk
Posted by Mikey
Okay this is like fucking amazing. Please write more! (:
Posted by blake
ONE WORD WOW .
i love the ending and the begining oh please i love everything on it this is the best ,,,,to be honest truelly the best story i've read though the sex part is a lil small but i dont care i really love it
Posted by Joe
that was just... the BEST story i've ever read. :') you MUST write more! what will his mom say? will he tell Jenn everything? does he come out??? i'll be checking for part 2! X
Posted by Bryan Chavez
What A MINDBLOWING,Sweet, And Good story. you should defenetely continue:D bryanchavez2038@yahoo.com
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Posted by Airo
you have to keep writing please its sooo good =P
Posted by Colin
~From the author~
So just going to reply to a comment or two. Someone asked how someone can forget their best friend. If memories are unpleasant enough, it is possible to shut out most of a time period. The brain has an amazing ability to defend itself against the unpleasant.
I know what I'm going to do with the sequel it just will take a while to type it all out:
Colin's dad comes into the picture
Someone cheats
Someone gets killed
I felt like writing something with different characters while I was on vacation so keep a look out for Second Chances if you want to see something with different characters. I'm not sure how long it will take them to approve it but I'll be submitting it in the next couple days. I still plan to do sequel to Unlikely some time in September or October (Though I may get a boyfriend by then, I've got a guy in my crosshairs, which would take up some time and give me less time for this. Sorry but you're all taking a back seat to him if it works out.)
Comments and suggestions are always appreciated, though please, constructive ones are significantly more useful and will help me do better in the future.
Posted by Julian murry
Loved it hot as fuck!,
Posted by ry
i really enjoyed this story, better than most stuff put up here
Posted by ry
i really enjoyed this story, better than most stuff put up here
Posted by Jasmine
brilliant !!!
Posted by Michael
Great start mate. Your evolving relationship with Dave would make a fine story. Look forward to more. I think you have a good balance between character development, narrative, drama and eroticism.Also pleasing to find an author with high literacy skills Lol, Mike (from Aus)
Posted by Fake Name
That was amazing. I think there was the right amount of sex. So many people spend way to much time with the sex and no time with the story. It was great.
Posted by Anthony M Linares
i cried like a little bitch but i loved it best story here yet.
Posted by Keith
Wow just read both of ur writings and must say i am impressed :D loved that they were really long nd that they had great characters nd an actual semi-believable story line... Although for my liking it needed a bit more detail in the sex parts.. Cant wait for ur next pieces :D btw i get the feeling that there is a truth to these storys... Which i love :) keep on writing!!
Posted by Connor
This is the best story I have ever read! PLEASE continue this story! You made it an actual story not just sex... Great job! :D
Posted by Andrew
This is really good. I enjoyed it and hope to read more.
Posted by john
Great story. I hope you add to it.
Posted by Sonam tobgay.
To be honest, its much better and i really enjoyed it. The characters and especially the plot is very good.
Posted by John
Great story line. I hope you write some more on this one. I feel like I'm part of the story. WOW. I would give my life to have a lover like that, witch I have never had.
Posted by ponche
dude keep on writing that was brilliant3
Posted by Zachary
this is an amazing story! I hope to see more!
Posted by Anna
best story ever!! write more!!
Posted by Eddie
Hooked can't wait for more!!
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