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When I'm with you: Part 8 reviews

Posted by Miles
Oh my god I beat Miggy to first review. This is easily the best new series- Please write more soon, your a talented author
Posted by Miguel
Ahh! i love eht! kant wait 4 part 9! nd i no we beat miggy! continue please thiz is by far the best!
Posted by Miggy
OMG OMG OMG OMG! HERE IT IS! AND I TOTALLY LOVE IT!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR 9!!!!!!
Posted by Miggy
oh,and just a little thing i noticed. I thought Tyler had a little sister, and now the name of his sibling is james? i just noticed.
Posted by Miggy
btw, the story line kind of reminds me of queer as folk the us version which I TOTALLY LOVE AS HELL! HEHEHE!
Posted by Miggy
OMG! CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 9! GOD! KIERAN!!!! :D
Posted by Miggy
WHEN I'M WITH YOU series are the best!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Miggy
KIERAN, your THE BEST!
Posted by taurus
Lovely, and Kieran please don't take long to release the next chapter like you did with this one, this is like ecstacy it'sso addictive and Im starting to miss kai.
Posted by Miggy
BTW, I AGREE WITH TAURUS! YIPEEEEEEE! CHAPTER 9!!! GAAAH!
Posted by Miggy
Pleeeeeeesh! PART NINEEEEEEEEEE! :D
Posted by Miggy
LOVE YOU KIERAN! YAAAAAAAAAAAAY! \:D/
Posted by albert
OMG... DIS TURNED OUT 2 BE MY FAV CHAPTER. WISH I WULD HAV SM1 2 LEAN ON WEN D TYME COMES...,CAN JST IMAGINE MY DAD RANTIN ND SPITTIN HIS VENOM.lol. U kip gettin better kieran pls kip it up.... Ciao.
Posted by Miggy
I LOVE YOU KIERAN! :D
Posted by CJ
i personally love TJ and Tyler. i actually like them more than Kai and Eddie. They're much more relateable and the twists keep you on the edge of your seat. i look forward to reading more about TJ and tyler!and Kai and Eddie as well :3
Posted by Miggy
I'm GOING CRAAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZEEEEEEEH!
Posted by Dean
This is amazing. It's the perfect mixture of being sexy and romantic. It has it's moments where you're like "Awwwwww!" and then there are the moments where you're like "Shit, that's hot!" I don't know how many of these there are total, but if you got the ideas, keep writing!
Posted by Josh
Genuinely don't read like fuck all lmao but this is my fave
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