Posted by Miles Oh my god I beat Miggy to first review. This is easily the best new series- Please write more soon, your a talented author
Posted by Miguel Ahh! i love eht! kant wait 4 part 9! nd i no we beat miggy! continue please thiz is by far the best!
Posted by Miggy OMG OMG OMG OMG! HERE IT IS! AND I TOTALLY LOVE IT!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR 9!!!!!!
Posted by Miggy LOL! @MILES! SORRY MAN! I WAS OUT SHOPPING WENT HOME LATE! :P
Posted by Miggy oh,and just a little thing i noticed. I thought Tyler had a little sister, and now the name of his sibling is james? i just noticed.
Posted by Miggy btw, the story line kind of reminds me of queer as folk the us version which I TOTALLY LOVE AS HELL! HEHEHE!
Posted by Kevin Omg it's about time the site posted this!! Kieran please please please continue writing this series it is truly amazing!!
Posted by Miggy Yes, yes, yes! Continue writing it Kieran, please? :( I LOVE YOU!
Posted by Kieran Lee Haha, thanks. :)
And Tyler's never had a little sister, it's Kai. Tyler's always had a younger brother. :)
Posted by Miggy OH DANG FLABBIT! NOW I REMEMBER! LOL! I RE-READ ALL THE CHAPTERS COZ' I KINDA LIKE THE FEELING THAT THE STORY GIVES ME! :) I LOVE TJ NOW! :D AND YOU OFCOURSE! :)
Posted by Miggy OMG! CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 9! GOD! KIERAN!!!! :D
Posted by Miggy GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH! :((( I LOVE THIS STOOOOOORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KEEP RE-READING IT! :(((
Posted by Miggy WHEN I'M WITH YOU series are the best!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Miggy KIERAN, your THE BEST!
Posted by taurus Lovely, and Kieran please don't take long to release the next chapter like you did with this one, this is like ecstacy it'sso addictive and Im starting to miss kai.
Posted by Miggy ME TOO! I MISS KAI KAI! :( AND PLEASE! WRITE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! BTW, it clicked me.. The one I'm mentioning that has a sister but had a brother was Eddie. I remember him telling the bully that his little sister is more intimidating than the bully itself. :) Well, kinda figured he's being sarcastic! I LOVE YOU KIERAN LEE, MARRY ME? :D
Posted by Miggy BTW, I AGREE WITH TAURUS! YIPEEEEEEE! CHAPTER 9!!! GAAAH!
Posted by Miggy Pleeeeeeesh! PART NINEEEEEEEEEE! :D
Posted by Kieran Lee I submitted part 9 yesterday. Hopefully the site is quick this time. :)
Posted by Miggy LOVE YOU KIERAN! YAAAAAAAAAAAAY! \:D/
Posted by Miggy PART 10! PART 10! PART 10! PART 10! :D
Posted by albert OMG... DIS TURNED OUT 2 BE MY FAV CHAPTER. WISH I WULD HAV SM1 2 LEAN ON WEN D TYME COMES...,CAN JST IMAGINE MY DAD RANTIN ND SPITTIN HIS VENOM.lol. U kip gettin better kieran pls kip it up.... Ciao.
Posted by Miggy THE SITE TAKES LONGER THAN EXPECTED! :(((((
Posted by Kieran Lee I knoww, i hope it hurries up! :(
Posted by Miggy I LOVE YOU KIERAN! :D
Posted by Kieran Lee Thank you Miggy, I really appriciate the time you've taken out to wait for my stories and read them. :)
Posted by Miggy Well, it's because I find your stories very entertaining and very impressive! :)
Posted by Miggy I think I know why they won't post it yet. Maybe they have a maximum limit on how many stories they should post, like 50 stories submitted before posting.. I think you should write more! :)
Posted by Kieran Lee It's because they have to review each story before they can post it on the site. :)
Posted by Miggy They should know that when the story named "When I'm With You" It doesn't need to be double checked. Even though they don't review it they should know it would be a hit! :)
Posted by Miggy I think you should write part 10 already Kieran.. :)
Posted by Miggy It's been two weeks! :( Damn site!
Posted by Kieran Lee I knoww. :(
Posted by CJ i personally love TJ and Tyler. i actually like them more than Kai and Eddie. They're much more relateable and the twists keep you on the edge of your seat. i look forward to reading more about TJ and tyler!and Kai and Eddie as well :3
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Posted by Miggy I'm GOING CRAAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZEEEEEEEH!
Posted by Miggy WTF! CMON! :(((( DANG SITE!
Posted by Dan I agree the tj and Tyler parts are very relatable and interesting. I find there relationship sooo cute! Lol can't wait to read more. You should have this put together as a book or ebook and publish it . Self publishing is very affordable.
Posted by Josh Develing I am fairly new to this site and have just read the whole of this story, this was so well written compared to some of the other crap that people have posted. I really look forward to reading more of your work if you decide to write another series. Kindest Regards
Josh
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Posted by Dean This is amazing. It's the perfect mixture of being sexy and romantic. It has it's moments where you're like "Awwwwww!" and then there are the moments where you're like "Shit, that's hot!" I don't know how many of these there are total, but if you got the ideas, keep writing!