Posted by cris WTF!? make it longer! And dnt just leav it like that!!! I want to kno more!!!! Hurry and make more!!!
Posted by Kieran Lee @Cris, I've written the next chapter, just waiting for the story to get more views as I won't write more if people aren't interested. If I do get more reviews over the next few days i'll post it straight away. Thanks for reading :)
Posted by Nick Yes do continu i log on to ds site nly to read ur stories..swear.
And i ope dat u dnt leav da story incomplte. And by da luks f it da nxt story's gona b quite intrstin. So ope u continu bcoz its gr8 readin ur stories..
Vn wen ppl ar intrstd dey jst 4gt to shw it..so i ope dat wnt cloud ur judgment in continuin da story..
Posted by john smith that was great again! cant wait till the story climaxs! making us wait is making it more interesting!
Posted by Badboy Cool! Continue this story please! :)
Posted by CJ this was great! best story i've read for sure. a part 3 would be awesome!
Posted by Kieran Lee thankyou guys,
part 3 should be up soon! :)
Posted by Danny B This is great, I'm so into it, I can't wait for the next part of the story, its probably the best one on this sight, its well written and has a griping story line, I hope that you continue to build on the character development and make harder times for Kai before the big pay off, or maybe the big let down. But keep it up its fabulous!! Well done pal!
Can't wait for the next part!
Xoxo
Posted by Mike This isone of the best series I've encountered on this site-it depicts real people with real feelings. I like the way the characters evolve in their sexuality, and also the female interaction, which adds depth and excitement to the narrative. I'm sure lots of people can identify with Kai Does he represent the author's persona? Keep up the suspense Kieran. Mike
Posted by Fjona aww i felt SO bad for Kai!!! :(
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