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When I'm with you : Part 2 reviews

Posted by cris
WTF!? make it longer! And dnt just leav it like that!!! I want to kno more!!!! Hurry and make more!!!
Posted by john smith
that was great again! cant wait till the story climaxs! making us wait is making it more interesting!
Posted by Mike
This isone of the best series I've encountered on this site-it depicts real people with real feelings. I like the way the characters evolve in their sexuality, and also the female interaction, which adds depth and excitement to the narrative. I'm sure lots of people can identify with Kai Does he represent the author's persona? Keep up the suspense Kieran. Mike
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