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When I'm with you: Part 10 : Final Chapter reviews

Posted by Malik Phillips
I loved this story it was the best series ever and i'm kinda mad it ended but i hope you continue the series cause i would really enjoy reading it
Posted by Miggy
Well, I just hope you continue writing Kieran! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! :D The proposing part just made me cum without touching myself. LOL! TRUE!
Posted by Miggy
Oh, and BTW I'm so happy that Barry Goodman and his friends deserved what they got in the end.
Posted by Miggy
"Or maybe perhaps you could continue with tj and Tyler's story!" OMFG! PLEASE, KIERAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE GOTTA HAVE IT!! :D :D :D
Posted by liam
WOW this series was amazing my heart nearly stopped beating when I thought Kai was going to die and then again when he proposed... You HAVE to keep writing, your absolutly amazing!!!!
Posted by Taylor
Omg I'm so sad this series has ended, but now I'm soo excited for sammies choice!! I can't wait to read it!!
Posted by taurus
There should be a fan site just for keiran.....I love you and ur stories man. My friends and i are crazy about you, you should visit us in South Africa sometime, we'll give u a warm welcome. Do u have a facebook account?
Posted by Miggy
BTW, enough sad moments! I'M REALLY EXCITED ABOUT SAMMIE'S CHOICE! YEAH!
Posted by britt
how long till its all updated the new stories ??
Posted by Kieran Lee
I don't know when they will be updated but I haven't submited the first part of my story so it won't be amoungst the new stories.
Posted by Miggy
OMG! OMG! OMG!!!! I'M DEFINITELY EXCITED KIERAN! OMG! OMG! OMFG!
Posted by Miggy
Yaay! Yaay! Can't wait wait!! :D :D :D :D :D :D!
Posted by Jacob Lee
Kieran, all I want to say is that this series was very heartwarming. To me, it showed the great depths of love and devotion, and the victory of overcoming truly difficult challenges. Many times, I had tears in my eyes for both the sad and joyous parts. I loved how you ended the series with the proposal, but I would have like to know what happens with Toby and Tyler. Maybe you could right a small spin-off story just to satisfy some curious minds. Anyways, loved the series. It felt very real, and I believe is what made this series to be likeable and even loved. Keep on writing!
Posted by Bob
Great Series! I also love Sammie's Choice!
Posted by Moody Schwartz
I kept wondr'ng that this story can still continue... You know, something like a twist where there's some mistake one has made that leaves them to just keep glances at each other. You know what I'm saying? Anyway, Great story. I guess i just don't want it to end.
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