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Posted by Arun T
Whoop, beat Miggy :) this was BY FAR the best new series on this site. It was a pleasure to read and I'm sad it has ended. Thank you Kieran Lee and I hope you continue writing.
Posted by Malik Phillips
I loved this story it was the best series ever and i'm kinda mad it ended but i hope you continue the series cause i would really enjoy reading it
Posted by Miggy
Why END? :( BUT, I LOVE! :D
Posted by Miggy
Well, I just hope you continue writing Kieran! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! :D The proposing part just made me cum without touching myself. LOL! TRUE!
Posted by Kevin
That series was so beautiful I get teary eyed every time I read it or think of it. Thankyou Kieran for writing this incredible series and showing me what true love Is really like. It has been an absolute pleasure watching this series grow and change and I hope you will continue to use your talents and write another series for us :)! Or maybe perhaps you could continue with tj and Tyler's story! Well, whatever you choose to do with your writing I just wanted to say how talented you are and how amazing this series is. Thanks again for sharing your story with us and I hope you will continue to write for us in the future :)
Posted by Miggy
Oh, and BTW I'm so happy that Barry Goodman and his friends deserved what they got in the end.
Posted by Miggy
"Or maybe perhaps you could continue with tj and Tyler's story!" OMFG! PLEASE, KIERAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE GOTTA HAVE IT!! :D :D :D
Posted by Miggy
Oh, and Kieran I blame you because, this story made my heart ached for more! :( PLEASE WRITE MORE! :D
Posted by britt
Awwww how Cute. you should a couple of sequals like, the wedding and stuff :)
orrr Tj & ty life that would be heaps good :) 3
Posted by Miggy
"orrr Tj & ty life that would be heaps good :) 3" PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! TYLER AND TOBY! :( I HOPE THEY HAVE A ROLLERCOASTER LOVE LIFE TOO! :D :D :D! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Posted by Miggy
BTW, Kieran I hope you'll spend a time reading my first story that I've written.. It's called 'Love Has Spoken : Part 1' Let me know what you think! :) THANK YOU! :D
Posted by Kieran Lee
Thankyou to everyone who has taken time to read all 10 parts to this story. I ended it here because I really have nothing more to say about the 4 characters. I would love to of continued it up to their wedding & future and finished it with "And they lived happily ever after" but that's not real life is it? Maybe the characters will appear in stories to come however 'When i'm with you' ends here. I already have a new idea for my next story, it will be called "Sammie's Choice", I will release it in a month or so, so look out for it. Thanks again the support has been great and never exspected it to come so far! :D
Posted by Miggy
Well, Kieran I hope Sammie's Choice and When I'm With You is somehow connected... Like Kai Kai, making a cameo appearance in the next story like buying something in a store, or Eddie buying groceries or stuff like that.. Iono, IMHO I think it would be cool having them have cameos.. So, it's somehow connected to one another (The story i mean) :) Oh, and thank you too for indulging us on some of your best works! :) I hope Sammie's Choice ain't that far from happening and being posted! ehehe.. :)
Posted by Edgar
i cried when i hear the BEEEEEEEP @miggy u talk alot dont u think? btw i read ur story its nice
Posted by Miggy
LOL @Edgar I don't think, I do! :D
Posted by liam
WOW this series was amazing my heart nearly stopped beating when I thought Kai was going to die and then again when he proposed... You HAVE to keep writing, your absolutly amazing!!!!
Posted by britt
plzzzz juust little 'one shots' of their life plz plz ;*3
Posted by Seth
Well Kie like i said earlier you are amazing how can i put the words together to just say you got it .it is the most amazing end ive ever seen like i was the first person to comment this series i will be with you to the end you show me that you are full of motions and you know what love is so i really hope that someday im gonna meet u
ps: i added you on mesenger please exept it and thank u very much for being so talented
Posted by Miggy
Kieran.. I've finished part 2 of my story i've submitted it.. and i hope you don't mind.. since i really love your stories i actually mentioned kai and eddie in my story.. I love you hope your not mad! :( BIG LOVE KIERAN! HOPING TO SEE SAMMIE'S CHOICE SOON! :D
Posted by Taylor
Omg I'm so sad this series has ended, but now I'm soo excited for sammies choice!! I can't wait to read it!!
Posted by Kieran Lee
Thank you for the comments everyone! :D And Miggy, that's fine, i'm just suprised you didn't even ask me first, kind of mean. :(
Posted by Miggy
Well, I might think you would've like it them being mentioned.. :( I'm sorry! I'm very very sorry! :(( Don't be mad at me right now my life is fucked up as it is! I'm very sorry!! :((
Posted by Joe
This was a really good series, I enjoyed it all the way through. Your writing style was a welcome break from the usual, "describe me + dick size, describe him + dick size, hot sex, the end" method usually employed.
Posted by Kieran Lee
Thank you Joe :). And Miggy, like I said I don't mind I am just suprised you didn't ask me first.
Posted by taurus
There should be a fan site just for keiran.....I love you and ur stories man. My friends and i are crazy about you, you should visit us in South Africa sometime, we'll give u a warm welcome. Do u have a facebook account?
Posted by Miggy
KIERAN! :(( I promise I'll ask next time! :D Forgive me?
Posted by Kieran Lee
Thankyou Taurus! If I ever visit South Africa i'll let you know haha :). And no I don't have a facebook account anymore, didn't really like it so I deactivated my account. Lol Miggy, there's nothing to frogive, i'm not mad at you. :) x
Posted by Miggy
:,)
Posted by Miggy
BTW, enough sad moments! I'M REALLY EXCITED ABOUT SAMMIE'S CHOICE! YEAH!
Posted by Kieran Lee
Me too! I hope everyone likes it as it will be a big change from this story. :)
Posted by Miggy
Well, I'm sure it will turn out very good! :)
Posted by britt
how long till its all updated the new stories ??
Posted by Kieran Lee
I don't know when they will be updated but I haven't submited the first part of my story so it won't be amoungst the new stories.
Posted by Miggy
OMG! OMG! OMG!!!! I'M DEFINITELY EXCITED KIERAN! OMG! OMG! OMFG!
Posted by Miggy
I hope Sammie's Choice is near finish! :) Can't wait Kieran. :)
Posted by Kieran Lee
I have uploaded a short introduction to the story. :)
Posted by Miggy
Yaay! Yaay! Can't wait wait!! :D :D :D :D :D :D!
Posted by Kieran Lee
Hey guys, the first part to my new story 'Sammie's Choice' is on the site, however it's annoyingly not on he main page. Hope you all read it and tell me if it's worth continueing or not. :)
Posted by Daniel
That was amazing! Kept me gripped all the way through, once I started reading I couldn't stopped. It had me in tears at parts, for example whent he BEEEEP part, and in joy when he proposed.
This is the first story i've ever read where I was in it all the way through, and i'm really said te series is ending!
But, yes, what a frantastic read, you are very talented!
Posted by Jacob Lee
Kieran, all I want to say is that this series was very heartwarming. To me, it showed the great depths of love and devotion, and the victory of overcoming truly difficult challenges. Many times, I had tears in my eyes for both the sad and joyous parts. I loved how you ended the series with the proposal, but I would have like to know what happens with Toby and Tyler. Maybe you could right a small spin-off story just to satisfy some curious minds. Anyways, loved the series. It felt very real, and I believe is what made this series to be likeable and even loved. Keep on writing!
Posted by Tim
Kieran, I literally cancelled all my plans today to read "When I'm With You". This was by far one of the best stories I have ever read and I wish you all the best in your writing career. I sincerely hope you consider writing in your professional career. Your gift with language is truly something to be admired. I loved this story. --Tim
Posted by Kieran Lee
Thankyou for the lovely comments everyone, glad you all enjoyed. :)
Posted by Fjona
@Miggy ssssshhh! you talk ALOT! no offensive
@Kieran amazing story:)
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