I thought it would be a good story but it was amazing, well my friend im gonna tel ya
you are talanted and I CANT WAIT for the next chapter. BRAVO & WELL DONE.(im gonna email you soon to ask you some qustions)
Posted by Jose Excellent! Please keep it up!
Posted by Brandon Love it. I want to see what happens with with Ty next though. I love their part the most. Keep writing. :)
Posted by Preston Very Nice!
Posted by Andrew Morton OMG!! I loved it!!!
I don't think I can wait for the next one. Please hurry!!!
Did I mention I loved it!! Its so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Kevin Another amazing story :)! The lovestory in this is really beautiful, and the sex scenes are very hot too! Please keep writing more!
Posted by Jack Lynn This is seriously amazing!
I love how your story is more then just sex, but the sex is pretty hot too! (;
You need to keep writing, You're so good at it!
Posted by Fernando Perfect story. I absolutely need more!:)
Posted by Nick OMG I LOVE IT POST MORE ASAP PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Mike Well Kieran, this series is turning into a masterpiece. I was blown away by the mix of drama, passion, and sheer sexual lust of these two wonderful young lovers. I would like to see Kai Eddie, Tyler and TJ all hook up into an orgy in part 6 I'm sure you have the skill to describe what they do to each other LOL Mike
Posted by Kieran Lee Thankyou for all the comments!
I'm sorry, but I am still writing part six, but nearly finished now and I will post it as soon as its done! Once again thankyou guys. :)
Posted by Web Cam Best part so far. Will soon be reading part 6, I can't wait! :) x
Posted by johny love your work.. never stop.. u ave a gift.. y dnt u write a book.. it wud b class
I rode the guy merciless. He moaned louder and louder. I didn´t worry whether it was because of pain or pleasure. He was there to please me. I loved it and that is all that counts. I put my hand around his throat and pulled him towards me. It was as if I was riding a wild horse. I put my arms around his chest, squeezed him hard against me, as a snake that is squeezing his prey to death...