Posted by Ken Wow these stories are getting really intense!! This series is truly amazing!! I cannot wait until the next part!! Please keep writing more :)!!
Posted by Marco Wow, weird ending but what a great story
Posted by Reagan Wow yes please keep going!
Thanks for such a-m-a-z-i-n-g writing!! :)
Posted by Louie I love this part especially with tj and tyler parts of wat tyler does i doo too
Posted by Louie Ohh and i forgot to say make more its soo f*ckn good
Posted by Jose Please prioritize on TJ/Ty part of the story. Always awesome .keep on!
Posted by Sam Young I love it! It's so good!
I seriously read this like 5 times now. Not even kidding I can't stop reading it!
I can't wait till the next one!
Posted by Erin I love what your doing with the TJ and Tyle plot. And I thought the ending was really good. Yet again you wrote another amazing one. Keep it up!
Posted by Kieran Lee Thankyou so much for all the comments. :)
Posted by Stanley GOD I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS! THANK YOU! PLEASE! KEEP WRITING! :D
Posted by Marco Please continue! It's the 0nly series that keeps on going. Some of the other writers just stopped! And I thought you'd be doing the same thing. BUT HELL! This story is just too real to be a fiction!
Posted by Carlos Kieran Lee let's have a date! LOL! But, seriously the last part with Kai and Eddie, I, personally LOVE EDDIE! But, at the same time I kinda hated him for letting Kai hurt himself with a scissor.. The last thing I wanna make my boyfriend do is kill himself! And I think the "I'd die for you" is a little cliche.. I think, it would make it more cuter if Kai would say, "No, I won't die for you! I'll live for you! :D LOVE LOVE LOVE THE STORY! HOPE IT NEVER ENDS! Or, it can end at around Part 150? LOL! Keep it up! It's really good!
Posted by Charlie Great story.!! I too kept reading this over and over again. Keep it going please.!!! These stories are perfectly written.!
Posted by seth OMG you really good wait for my real comment about you love you..............
Posted by Kieran Lee Hey guys,
sooo...My laptop has been broken for the past week so I haven't got much done. I'm afraid part 7 will take longer than normal, but i'll try and be as quick as I can. Thankyou for all the comments, they mean a lot. :)
Posted by Mike Hi Keiran, Another masterly episode from my favorite erotic story teller I'm blown away by your ability to keep developing these characters and to constantly intensify the drama and sensual passion between them This series is destined to become a classic saga in homoerotic writing. I'm awake all night thinking of these four lovers of yours and can't wait to read part seven. Mike
Posted by Fjona WEIRD ASS ENDING O.o